She has a really cute smile here :)

Like why is this review getting Gamergate levels of harassment and vitriol thrown at it? Why is Moistcritikal making a video on it? Why are gamers so weird? The internet was a mistake.

I was very curious over why this review in particular was getting so much hate. I expected something egregious. I actually read it and it was the most normal review I've ever read. The writer clearly explained their views in depth and backed up their points. Why are people mad?

I'm writing a story and I don't even know what genre it would fall into so I think I'm doing something right.

That sounds about right

Diabellstar, the witch who defied the sin

#yugioh

Drawing of a book with a desk printer on the cover with the title "The printer that simply worked and other fairy tales"

I finished the Master of All Section of Octopath Traveler 0. The first decently challenging boss in the game. It feels like the only way they could balance having 8 party members was by giving bosses one shots lmao

as it becomes clear that Yes has won in VA and gerrymandering will pass, a message to Republican voters:

you brought this on yourselves

you convinced the most fairness-obsessed, That Wouldn’t Be Fair-minded voters in the country to affirmatively vote to put you in the dumpster

you earned this

I did while it aired. I remember liking it.

エステル
#空の軌跡 #sora1st

I'm curious now. I only watched 3 episodes.

Reposts are very much appreciated!

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Theキャラ衣装のリチャードとアヤカ　#strangefake

I wish the remaster had the dub smh. I could just youtube the whole story to hear the dub version but that's still a huge time commitment.

Baten Kaitos + Origins

Would be nice if they didn't screw over the Mega Man voice actor over their hatred of unions though

I'm taking the feminist/radical gender abolitionist position on this one.

Same

This line is so getting removed in the remake lmao

I wish I had a waterproof laptop for my shower because if I could get the prose in my head when I'm in the shower onto the page, I'd be the greatest writer of our time.

It also makes it feel like less of a screenplay since having 10 sections in a row of "he went here and did this" would make it feel aimless. The characters have motivations and feelings about their current circumstances. It's just a matter of getting that out of my head and onto the page.

Yeah, finding that balance is tricky. My main concern is making a scene feel purposeful. Considering it's a chaotic battle royale scene I'm writing, having a section that is too short with little description can make it feel pointless, so I'm trying to include at least a little interiority.

I definitely need to go back and edit some earlier parts with this in mind as well, which will benefit by making the writing better. But it will also mean the word count will explode even more, and it's starting to look like chapter 2 will be over 20K words lol

My brother, who was paying for the family, unsubbed over this. Maybe I'll convince him to resub. While torrenting does work for me, it is a lot more convenient to just watch directly on Crunchyroll. Especially if I'm away from my computer and just have my phone with me.

Just a thought: How about we stop shaming the poor for buying things that may not be essential, and start shaming the rich for making a profit off things that are essential?

So I extended one scene from a cop's perspective by including a long racist rambling about how society would be much better without the immigrant vermin, with him imagining how great these slums would be if it was built for people like him. Can't wait for people to hate this character.

But adding interiority is helping with this. I'm writing a series of short scenes that keep cutting to the next because it's a complicated conflict with multiple perspectives. I wrote a few short paragraphs, and though it would be lame to leave it at that before going to the next scene.

One thing that I struggle with in writing is not making my story come off like a screen play. It's especially difficult with shorter segments where little happens. It's lame to have a scene that's just "He did this and he did that", followed by a cut to the next scene.