#Writing Advice: the good, the bad, and the ugly
We humans find it easy to remember simple sayings, little proverbs, if you will. New authors are bombarded with many axioms about the craft of writing. Some will be good, and some will lead to later problems. The commonly repeated writing proverbs…
Posts by Connie Jasperson
#FineArtFriday: Castle Bentheim by Jacob van Ruisdael, ca 1650
Artist: Jacob van Ruisdael (1628/1629–1682) Title: Bentheim Castle Genre: landscape painting Description: Castle Bentheim. The castle located on a hilltop, seen from below by a stream with a small waterfall, rocks, and tree trunks.…
Sometimes I want to write, but words fail me #writing
We all have moments when our creativity fails us. This happens when I have an idea, but the words won't come. Or when they do, they feel stilted, awful. It happens to every writer at some point, and we feel alone in that experience. The words…
#FineArtFriday: a second look at “Haying at Jones Inn” by George Henry Durrie 1854
Artist: George Henry Durrie (1820–1863) Title: English: Haying at Jones Inn Date: 1854 Medium: oil on canvas Dimensions: 22"×30" Location: Private collection Life has gone a little sideways here at Casa del…
Making a fantasy map #writing
Our modern lives are ruled by the geography of our area. Rivers, mountains, lakes, and ponds impede travel, forcing a road to go around them. Unfortunately, maps have fallen out of favor thanks to satellite technology and the GPS in our cell phones. Many people don’t…
#FineArtFriday: Kaaterskill Landscape by Asher Brown Durand 1850
Artist: Asher Brown Durand (1796–1886) Title: Kaaterskill Landscape Date: 1850 Medium: oil on canvas Dimensions: height: 54 cm (21.2 in); width: 44 cm (17.3 in) Collection: Princeton Art Museum What I love about this painting: Wow!…
Foundations of Worldbuilding: maps #writing
The town I grew up in bears little resemblance today to the place it was ten years ago. New subdivisions have arisen along what used to be country roads. New shopping centers now exist in areas where few people once lived. The local municipalities have…
#FineArtFriday: a closer look at “Spring in Giverny” by Claude Monet 1890
Artist: Claude Monet (1840–1926) Title: Spring in Giverny Date: 1890 Medium: oil on canvas Dimensions: height: 64.8 cm (25.5 in); width: 81 cm (31.8 in) Inscriptions: Signature and date bottom left: Claude Monet 90 I first…
Worldbuilding – Calendars and Maps #writing
I discovered early on that creating a calendar and a map for each novel gives me a realistic view of my plot arc. A mushy timeline stands out. I don't want my readers wondering how my characters managed to cram a week's worth of running around into only…
Planning a series #writing
I'm a fan of book series. I'm like every other avid reader in that I hate to see the story end. Also, if it's a really compelling series, I will wonder how it all started. Most authors don't plan for their novel-in-progress to become a series, but by the time they reach…
#FineArtFriday: Revisiting “In the Harbor” by Adolf Kaufmann
Artist: Adolf Kaufmann (1848–1916) Adolf Kaufmann: In the Harbor Date: by 1916 Medium: oil on canvas Dimensions: Height: 75 cm (29.5 in); Width: 102 cm (40.1 in) What I love about this painting: This image first appeared here in 2021. It…
Successful revisions #writing
I always think that in some ways, books are like machines. They're comprised of many essential components, and if one element fails, the book won’t work the way the author envisions it. So, what are these parts? Prose, plot, transitions, pacing, theme,…
#FineArtFriday: Claude Monet Painting by the Edge of a Wood by John Singer Sargent 1885
Artist: John Singer Sargent (1856–1925) Title: Claude Monet Painting by the Edge of a Wood Depicted people: Claude Monet, Alice Hoschedé Date: 1885 Medium: oil on canvas Dimensions: height: 54 cm (21.2 in);…
Microsoft, you are p**sing me off, and other random rants #writing
Look, Microsoft. I have been using your products since 1994. I've stuck with you through screens of death, through Windows ME and Vista, and through Windows 8. I adored Windows 10. I use your product every day, often for six to ten…
#FineArtFriday: A closer look at “The Peasant and the Nest Robber” by Pieter Bruegel the Elder 1568
Artist: Pieter Brueghel the Elder (1526/1530–1569) Title: "The Peasant and the Nest Robber" Date: 1568 Medium: oil on oak wood Dimensions: 59.3 × 68.3 cm (23.3 × 26.8 in) Collection:…
Exploring Depth #writing
We often talk about the story arc and its component parts and features. But to explain depth, we must put all the parts and pieces back together and examine the story as a whole. So, what is depth, exactly? It is the component of the narrative that supports and informs the…
#FineArtFriday: A second look at “Gathering Wood for Winter” by George Henry Durrie 1855
Title: Gathering Wood for Winter Artist: George Henry Durrie (1820–1863) Date: 1855 Medium: oil on canvas Dimensions: height: 26 in (66 cm); width: 36 in (91.4 cm) Collection: Private collection Why I love…
Building strength as a writer #writing
This last week, I edited a paper that my grandson had to submit to his literature class at his college. That experience sparked the realization that many people make it all the way through school without learning even a few of the more common rules for…
#FineArtFriday: A Merry Company in an Arbor by Adriaen van de Venne 1615
Artist: Adriaen van de Venne (circa 1589–1662) Title: A Merry Company in an Arbor Date 1615 Medium: oil on panel Dimensions: height: 164 mm (6.45 in); width: 230 mm (9.05 in) Collection: Getty Center What I love about this…
Revisions part 2 – Allegory, Symbolism, and Foreshadowing #writing
Allegory and symbolism are important tools in a writer's toolbox. They are similar to each other but different and often misunderstood. The difference between them is in how they are presented. An allegory is a narrative, a moral…
#FineArtFriday: a second look at “Under flowering trees” by Adolf Kaufmann
Artist: Adolf Kaufmann (1848–1916) Title: Under flowering trees Date: before 1916 Medium: oil on canvas Inscription: signed A. Kaufmann What I love about this painting: I first featured this painting n 2023. Adolph Kaufmann…
Revisions, part 1: Shakespeare and the Art of Foreshadowing #writing
Good foreshadowing is crucial. If, like me, you work from an outline (a planner), you might plan to embed clues in the first quarter of the story, hints that are little warning signs of future events.For those who wing it…
#FineArtFriday: Flock of Sheep with Shepherdess on a Rainy Day by Adloph Kaufmann
Artist: Adolf Kaufmann (1848–1916) Title: Flock of Sheep with Shepherdess on a Rainy Day Date: by 1916 Medium: oil on canvas Dimensions: 102 × 113 cm (40.1 × 44.4 in) What I love about this painting: Oh those poor…
Bringing emotions to life #writing
To create characters with emotional depth, you must swim with the sharks of show-and-tell. Most authors who have been in writing groups for any length of time become adept at writing emotions on a surface level. We work to show our characters’ facial expressions,…
#FineArtFriday: Spring Landscape by Ellen Favorin ca 1900
Artist: Ellen Favorin (1853–1919) Title: English: Spring Landscape (Suomi: Kevätmaisema) Genre: landscape painting Date: circa 1900 Dimensions: height: 20.7 cm (8.1 in) Collection: HAM Helsinki Art Museum What I love about this painting:…
A few ideas for a Zen #writing life
We may all write novels or short stories or poetry, but every writer is different. We each have our own approach to getting our work on paper. I’m like everyone else. I have difficulty thinking creatively when life is too stressful. However, blog posts are more…
#FineArtFriday: An Old Red Cedar on the Rocks near West Manchester, Massachusetts by Marianne North 1871
Title: An Old Red Cedar on the Rocks near West Manchester, Massachusetts Date: 1871 Dimensions: height: 35 cm (13.7 in) Collection: Marianne North Gallery What I love about this painting:…
Plot Armor, Objective, and Risk #writing
My weekend got derailed due to life cluttering it up with huge chunks of reality. I hate it when reality ruins my carefully plotted existence. So, instead of a new post, I am revisiting a post from 2023, a short story about a writer wrestling with her…
#FineArtFriday: a closer look at “Off the Coast of Cornwall” by William Trost Richards 1904
Artist: William Trost Richards (1833–1905) Title: Off the Coast of Cornwall Genre: landscape art Date: 1904 Medium: oil on canvas Dimensions : Height: 55.9 cm (22 in); Width: 91.4 cm (35.9 in) Collection …
What is an archetype and how does it fit into my work? #writing
If you write fiction, you are making use of an archetype, whether you know it or not. In literature, the word archetype describes the kinds of characters and plots featured in stories across all cultures and eras of human history.…