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Calliope Reid collage.
A photo of various knives, a puzzle of Starry Night, a scenic phoot of a valley with a river cutting through and a person's legs, a campsite on a lake, a journal full of writing, a starry page that reads "STARS: For my partI know nothing with certainty, but the sight of the stars makes me dream. -Vincent Van Gogh", and a photo of Freya Allen.

Calliope Reid collage. A photo of various knives, a puzzle of Starry Night, a scenic phoot of a valley with a river cutting through and a person's legs, a campsite on a lake, a journal full of writing, a starry page that reads "STARS: For my partI know nothing with certainty, but the sight of the stars makes me dream. -Vincent Van Gogh", and a photo of Freya Allen.

Orion collage.

A photo of the Orion constellation, a close up of a hand holding up a crown, the tarot card Death, a hand + arm that slowly turns to black smoke, hands that are completely covered in black and sparking, an eye where the eyeball is black and the iris is white, and a photo of Curran Walters.

Orion collage. A photo of the Orion constellation, a close up of a hand holding up a crown, the tarot card Death, a hand + arm that slowly turns to black smoke, hands that are completely covered in black and sparking, an eye where the eyeball is black and the iris is white, and a photo of Curran Walters.

2. UNTITLED is a dual POV YA contemporary fantasy.
Calliope is a demon hunter who wakes up one day to find her short term memories are broken.
Orion is a reaper tasked with retriving the soul of an angel who escaped proper death...and is now hiding in Calliope's body. #CRPDryads

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An Oath With The Stars collage

a library shelf with books labeled "Ghosts", a sihlouette of a demon, the clear night sky, a girl with flames on her body, a girl with pink hair, a shadow of a human hand with werewolf claws, a sihlouette of a couple about to kiss, vampire fangs

An Oath With The Stars collage a library shelf with books labeled "Ghosts", a sihlouette of a demon, the clear night sky, a girl with flames on her body, a girl with pink hair, a shadow of a human hand with werewolf claws, a sihlouette of a couple about to kiss, vampire fangs

I have a couple:
1. AN OATH WITH THE STARS (my revpit sub) is in the editing stages. It follows Lily as she joins an organization of monster hunters to get revenge on a fire elemental for the killing her friend and trying to kill her family. #CRPDryads

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1. Panster but I'm trying to lean more into plotter
2. Depends. Really, I need both to feel earned.
3. Fantasy
4. Romance subplot
5. Horror elements
6. Black cat
7. Introvert

#CRPDryads #CampRevPit

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Hey #CampRevPit and #CRPDryads I'm currently editing my YA urban fantasy An Oath With the Stars and drafting a YA contemporary fantasy romance about demon hunters and reapers and possession.
Outside of writing, I'm gearing up for a Curse of Strahd campaign (Tiefling Tempest Cleric) #CampKickOff

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So I did a thing...

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Congratulations everyone!
And congratulations to the runners-up too!

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🌌Edit AOWTS, esp. the beginning (bc two 10Qs posts have me thinking they're about my sub)
🌊Continue rewriting TToH
🪦Finish drafting an untitled YA urban fantasy/romance about a girl possessed by the soul of an angel and the reaper tasked with retriving said soul
🖋️Find some CPs maybe
#RevPitWaiting

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a cartoon character is sitting at a table with a bunch of food on it . ALT: a cartoon character is sitting at a table with a bunch of food on it .

*Some

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Come name fun facts:
Lily's parents own a flower shop. Their 3 daughters are named Lilyana, Chrysanthamum (Chrys), and Poppy.

Caius, his siblings, and some cousins are named after Shakespeare characters (Helena, Puck, Lucius, Olivia, Oberon, Ariel, Juliet, and Hero)
#RevPitWaiting

2 weeks ago 6 0 1 0

It differs between manuscripts. In one I've shelved, 'massive' was used a lot??? I don't know why.

In my #RevPit submission, the amount of times 'maybe' was used... That was diabolical. POV character is kinda headstrong, and then she turns around and goes "Well, maybe..." She's now more definitive.

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Incredibly out of context memes, but memes nonetheless🩷
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"What can I say? Parents love me." -Tad Flynn

And he's right.
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3/30: CP Shout Out

Shout out to my husband honestly. In the first draft, I had this idea for a couple chapters. He thankfully looked me in my two eyeballs after reading them and told me that one of my MCs was acting out of character. We refer to it as the "infamous birthday chapter" #RevPitWaiting

3 weeks ago 6 0 0 0

Why yes, Tad does have max Charisma stat.
And yes, Lily did dress up as Jessica Rabbit for Halloween to tease him🫶
It's also wild that I don't have 'film' in any of my current works in progress
#WIPSnips #RevPitWaiting

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From AN OATH WITH THE STARS, in which Tad uses Lily's parents' names and she hates that for herself🫰
#WIPSnips #RevPitWaiting

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Black background. A photo of a person, a messy convinience store aisle, cabins, someone hiding behind a tree, the woods with orange light, bloody footprints, a gun chamber with only one bullet, 4 colors (brown, moss gree, light green, orange). There are words associated with the story (Family, Zombies, Campsite, Silence, Late Autumn)

Black background. A photo of a person, a messy convinience store aisle, cabins, someone hiding behind a tree, the woods with orange light, bloody footprints, a gun chamber with only one bullet, 4 colors (brown, moss gree, light green, orange). There are words associated with the story (Family, Zombies, Campsite, Silence, Late Autumn)

2nd: A rewrite for THE TREASURES OF HADES. I'm changing some big things about it so it's a complete overhaul.

3rd: THIS BROKEN WORLD. YA zombie apocalypse novel that follows Nova and Malachi as they navigate the end of the world and the brginning of winter. (Collage below)
#RevPitWaiting

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I'm glad you asked!

1st: A currently untitled YA urban fantasy, dual POV. We follow Calliope Reid, a demon hunter who becomes possessed by the soul of an angel, and Orion, the reaper who's hellbent on saving her before the angel's soul consumes Calliope's.

#RevPitWaiting

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You could have him start the scene as "furniture". Like maybe his chair is positioned perfectly in the sunlight, but bc of that Donovan can't see so he shifts or moves seats, thus an act of defiance in this thing he otherwise can't escape. This also depends on where in the story this takes place

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...and his situation, given that this meeting is in a staged environment.

I hope this was helpful! Also sorry for the ramble. I saw strengths in both and thought combining them at points could work well.

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...but I like how the second paragraph is phrased in Option 1. "Gingerroot. Snowmelt. Three stirs clockwise." I like that a lot.

And Option 1's third paragraph feels stronger with "Polished, posied, chosen for..." That tells me that's what Donovan believes with certainty.

I'm intrigued by Donovan

3 weeks ago 0 0 1 0

Overall, I prefer Option 1.

My in-depth opinion is that I like the top paragraph from option 1 better, though I would personally remove the 2nd sentence. That would give "It was all staged..." more weight.

I like the action of Donovan tilting his head to look at the arch from option 2
(1/3)

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Meet Olive (orange) and Zagreus (void), my Halloween themed cats.
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From a wip that I've recently found inspiration for again while RevPit Waiting.

#WIPSnips #WriteSky

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An Oath With the Stars

open.spotify.com/playlist/4T1...

This is the longer version of the AOWTS playlist that is pinned to my profile fo anyone curious

4 weeks ago 0 0 0 0

Really there are 3:
🩷Lily's progress/revenge plot: Still Here by 2WEI, Forts, and Tiffany Aris
❤️Lily and Caius: Ma Meilleure Ennemie by Stromae & Pomme
💙Lily and Tad: itfeelslikeimfallinginlove by Coldplay

#RevPitWaiting

4 weeks ago 4 0 1 0
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Lily opts for a non-violent approach for her first ghost exorcism.
#WIPSnips #RevPitWaiting

4 weeks ago 17 0 0 0

Can't not use AOWTS for this.

And of course I have to use an excerpt that features one of Tad's many lily related nicknames for her, though this is one of the tamest ones. #WIPSnips #RevPitWaiting

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It's taken over as my favorite manga/anime (previously JJK)

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I deeply love that trilogy! CP is the best ending we probably could've gotten to that story. I had my husband watch season 1 of Shadowhunters and I kept telling him how Jace and Alec are nothing compared to Will and Jem.

And Tessa!!! All my love to her. One of my fave female protagonists.

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Clockwork Princess by Cassandra Clare, Inferno by Sherrilyn Kenyon, The 5th Wave by Rick Yancey, The Song of Achilles by Madeline Miller, Legendborn by Tracy Deon.

Currently reading Gachiakuta by Kei Urana, Ariande by Jennifer Saint, and Wool by Hugh Howey and those are all 🔥🔥🔥
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