even more goofy (these still go kinda hard tbh)
Posts by Gale @ p5 hell
with all the parts that have been added in editing i've officially hit 60k across all chapters. i would probably post the first chapter if not for the fact that i haven't written the intro yet lol. it sucks that i probably won't have a handle on how i want to start until i'm totally done.
i'm so fucking sick of editing. i'm going to cut off my hands but i gotta do it.
i'm literally going through and retying everything that i've already written and basically rewording/reworking it as i go and adding in things that were kind of missing and it's fulfilling! but time consuming.
there's just one lengthy scene with the thieves as a group but this bit from it makes me giggle.
i've chewed through around 40% in terms of editing now and this bit is still making me giggle. akechi is a complete fucking dysphoric mess.
i'm a hypocrite bc i love when akechi and akira get together and stay together but love when the thieves go their separate way as friends. something about friendships ending is really compelling to me in particular idk what it is. just the banality of passing time and how painful it can be.
where each of their traumas/problems end up conflicting in such a way that they're unable to bring themselves to forgive the other or recognize where they're coming from. it's uniquely delicious to my brain.
i actually love when the thieves generally end their friendships but the sumire-akira thing is particularly horrifying in a delightful way to me because i love to consider them just failing to be on the same wavelength and feeling betrayed by one another for completely reasonable things.
me: what shall i write today for fanfic
my brain: what if sumire and akira's relationship just shattered into a thousand pieces and could never be fixed again
me: that sounds Wonderful
They make me crazy btw. I was working on their second major scene together today in editing and felt dizzy with delight. I adore them.
WIP Wednesday! "Ren" and Goro making a deal?
Various doodles of Akechi using different kind of telephones on her black mask outfit. The text on the background are lyrics from “Telephone” by Lady Gaga and Beyoncé.
You and koi will always be some of the coolest people I know ;_; delighted by you always
全部くだらない
#ペルソナ5 #p5r
そういう思想の元生まれた認智
oh also just realized i've officially hit 50k on dance au!! this will be my longest fic yet but i'm very pleased with it. i am approaching the end though so i may be able to start posting and finishing editing by the end of the month eheheheh.
mizuki akiyama the misanthropic girl that you are (people always forget this! they always lean into how nice and genki she is, but she literally spent years of her life just hating EVERYONE and the world when she was forced back into the closet. do not forget. all her sides)
i think it's funny that if i wasnt neck deep in persona 5 still, i'd probably be fandom on project sekai and that'd be crazy in its own way. say what you will about prsk but it has a canon trans girl and she's genuinely one of my fave all time characters no matter how they handle the vagueness.
[sobbing emoji] i love akira kurusu so much they're so pretty, they should be in so many dresses forever, honestly,
BANGING POTS AND PANS YOU MADE THEM LOOK SO BEAUTIFUL MY DARLING!!!!!! i love you for this forever (already did but now it's FIVE-EVER!!!!!!) i love how you did their skirt and top ;-; i love having them with their hair slicked back close to their scalp and you made them so prettyyyyy buwehhhh
a pencil drawing of akira kurusu in a fancy samba costume and high heels with their hair pulled back
okay i dont have too much time left but i wanted to give akira a shot at least!! AND I JUST REALIZED I FORGOT THE EARRINGS . whateverrrr fuck my baka life
Comic starts with a panel of Akechi, saying "I- I didn't want to start an argument." Next panel shows Akechi again, but smiling and holding an index finger to his mouth. He says, "I just can't help myself sometimes." The next panel shows Sumire and Joker sitting at a table in the cafe. Sumire says "O-Oh! That's okay, Akechi-san!"
A panel of Akechi, smiling, says "Let's change the subject to something a bit lighter." Each subsequent panel of Akechi zooms in while the background gets darker. The last panel shows a slightly zoomed out image of Joker on a dark background, with the word "Liar" written in white.
I'm replaying P5R with my sister, and I had forgotten how WILD the Akechi dialogues were.
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