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Posts by Cir, a non-native English poet


"Grumpy"

I am in a bad mood this morning,
because I couldn't see you while I was sleeping,
and you didn't even appear in my dreams!

#poem
#poetry

2 years ago 63 8 1 0

I enjoy reading your calm, thoughtful, and zen-like poems too😊

2 years ago 0 0 0 0

Thank you too 😊

2 years ago 0 0 0 0

Thanks! I didn't realize it before but yeah, it does go well with the rhythm of hopscotch! 😊

2 years ago 0 0 0 0

Thank you so much for reading all my work!
I am glad to hear that😊
I didn't know about Natsuki(DDLC) but I will check it out😊

2 years ago 1 0 0 0

Thank you so much for commenting with your wonderful poem! It's beautiful😊

2 years ago 1 0 0 0


"It means"

When I say I like it,
it means I like it
When I say I hate it,
it means I hate it
When I say I love you,
it means I love you
When I say I hate you,
it means I love you

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#poetry

2 years ago 74 9 2 1

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2 years ago 0 0 0 0
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2 years ago 0 0 0 0

😊

2 years ago 1 0 0 0

Thanks a lot 😊

2 years ago 2 0 1 0


"Dancing in the rain"

I know you love dancing,
but you don't have to
dance and laugh like that
in this pouring rain, on the street
where busy people pass by,
because, you know,
okay, fine, I'm joining!

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#poem #poetry

2 years ago 67 8 5 0

Thanks! 😆

2 years ago 1 0 0 0

Thanks! 😊

2 years ago 1 0 0 0

Thanks again😊

2 years ago 1 0 0 0

Thanks😊

2 years ago 0 0 0 0

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2 years ago 0 0 0 0

Thank you so much, much, much😆

2 years ago 1 0 1 0
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I couldn't write much this week in English😥
I will try to write more often. Thanks!!

2 years ago 1 0 1 0

Thank you so much again for your encouraging words!! 😆

2 years ago 1 0 1 0

That sounds like a great way to teach both standard format and how to develop a unique voice!😊

2 years ago 1 0 1 0

Your comments also encouraged me a lot😊 I am more motivated to keep writing! (although I couldn't write much this week because of other busy stuff...)
I also read works of Murakami😊

2 years ago 2 0 1 0

Thank you for your encouraging words😊
It is very motivating to hear from a native-speaker like you that what I'm trying to do is not wrong.

2 years ago 1 0 2 0

Thank you so much for offering help with my grammar. That's very kind of you! While I strive for grammatical correctness in some poems (though I might make mistakes), others are intentionally unnatural. Some readers might not enjoy broken English, but I use it to distinguish myself from others😊

2 years ago 3 0 1 0

Thanks, thanks, thanks😆

2 years ago 1 0 0 0
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"Write, delete, write"

Many, many times,
I write, write, write, 
delete, delete, delete,
type, type, type, 
delete, delete, delete,
to say, say, say,
I love, love, love
you

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#poem
#poetry

2 years ago 90 15 4 1

Thanks 😊

2 years ago 1 0 0 0

Thanks😊

2 years ago 3 0 0 0

Hi 😊
I am not on sub stack
(I just googled to check what that is).
But why?

2 years ago 0 0 0 0

Thanks😊

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