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In a city where faith is law, a disciple of a death goddess must track down a magical killer, all while unravelling the dark secrets in his church and his past.
š©øHumorism based magic system
š”ļøMLM romance
š©øFaith/Religion vs Science/Academia
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Image: A man in a black cloak and a wide brim western style black hat, holding a revolver; only his eyes as yellow pinpricks are visible. Text: A Novel By Kelton Davis Blood Red Sand 109000 Words Adult Gothic Western Fantasy Querying Soon Art: Apocalypse by Oliver Odmark
Title: Comparable Titles Images of the covers of The Devils by Joe Abercrombie, Godkiller by Hannah Kaner, and Red Rabbit by Alex Grecian. Text drawn with an arrow from each image: Found family (from the Devils) Reluctant parent figure (from Godkiller) Western-inspire Gothic setting (from Red Rabbit) Unlikely travel companions (from all). Background image: same as first slide.
Title: Pitch Text: Corado is just trying to survive the nightāevery night. Being a nightrunner, one of the few brave or foolish enough to defy humanity's vampire masters to traffic himself and others across barony lines, doesn't make it any easier though. With vampire posses stalking the desert during the day and their ravenous Horde filling the sky each night, it's a miracle he's survived as long as he has. Some of it he chalks up to skill, some to instinct, but he knows that when the dawn comes, the main thing seeing him through the night is good old-fashioned luck. Nothing lasts forever though, and Corado's lucky streak soon comes to a quick and bloody end. After nighttime attack from the Horde leaves him stranded in the desert with a newly-orphaned boy named Hectar, he finds keeping the rest of the world at bay may not be as easy as he thought. Newfound companion in tow, he sets out to find what remains of the boy's family and finally put the whole thing behind him. But as he knows by now, no job is ever so simple. As he tries to escort Hectar to safety, whispers of rebellion start drifting on the wind. With a world free of the Horde beginning to look like a real possibility, Corado must face vampires, twisted monstrosities, and the darkness lurking in men's hearts before he decides whether the world he's cut himself out of is one worth fighting for after all. Background image: same as other slides
SINNERS x THE DEVILS x CASTLEVANIA
There's three rules to surviving as a nightrunner: don't get comfortable, don't be a hero, and don't be unlucky.
Corado's about to break all three.
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š¦ Monstrous Night Hordes
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Querying soon!
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title card with pregnancy photoshoot as the backdrop - close image on a womanās pregnant belly with two sets of hands cradling it text: V.E.S.S.E.L. / an agentās guide / carter elise key / M.A. in creative writing thesis project
pitch: evelyn innately trusts her husband, adam, to handle many of the front-facing affairs. he handles the money, he has a steady ipb, he goes golfing with his griends every Saturday. evie is happily in charge of ensuring thag their home is something to be proud of: clean, tidy, and presentable to the neighbours. despite the pleasant appearance, things are not what they seem in the adler household. adam desperately wants a son, and evie is trying her best to give him one. sheās already miscarried once, before she even knew she was pregnant, a crime equivalent to manalaughter in her tight-knit, christian fundamentalist hometown. twenty weeks into her second pregnancy, evie suddenly falls ill. she loses the baby, as well as her husbandās hope for a son. adam decides to admit evie for a three year treatment cycle to V.E.S.S.E.L., a program that assists women with fertility difficulties and ensures a safe, happy, and healthy pregnancy. or af least, thatās how their marketing team has decided to present their ātreatmentsā to the public.
comp titles: 01 - the handmaidās tale by margaret atwood 02 - tender is the flesh by agustina bazterrica 03 - biography of x by catharine lacey 04 - ācat personā by kristen roupenian
inspiration: when the story of adriana smith made national headlines, the 31-year-old Georgia woman who was declared brain dead but kept on life support to gestate a foetus (that didnāt even make it to term), i knew that we were, in short, in the bad place. this, combined with the systemic government takeover of womenās bodies in legislation, kindled a flame of outrage and painful empathy. iāve aways had a fascination with the structure and execution of cults. i came into possession of the novel cultish: the language of fanaticism and decided that my next work needed to involve this somehow. those running the program and in positions of power all subscribe to the cult of white supremacy, a terrifying potential reality for the U.S. today. evelyn begins the story subscribing to this mindset. sheās known no other option. through her exposure to others in the program, as well as both witnessing and being the victim of senseless violence and oppression, she comes to understand that the way of thinking sheās grown up with is not good. she must come to terms with this realisation and grapple with her new sense of identity.
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if youāre somehow not convinced that the state of the US is in flames, this work is for you.
𩸠those in power are lying to you
𩸠cult of christian fundamentalism/white supremacy
𩸠feminine rage
𩸠reclamation & self discovery
#w #a #sf #h #lf š„
an agentās guide to ODE: Fern and the nine realms of laerathor. carter elise key & lindsay vena.
pitch - the future of laerathor is written in the starsāor in blood. with everything on the line, Fern, Halvard, and Airika must decide how they want to be remembered. the Bardaegan Trials have only just begun, and this time they come with a deadly cost. is risking it all worth it? stats: - word count: 104k - debut with series potential - multi-pov 3rd person narration genre/audience: - fantasy/adventure - new adult/adult - influenced by norse mythology representation: - queer (normalized in world) - disability (hard of hearing/deaf)
comps/tropes: comp titles: blood beneath the snow by alexandra kennington the priory of the orange tree by samantha shannon all of us villains by amanda foody & c.l. herman tropes: - forged family - slow burn - political intrigue - prophecies - magic has a cost - doomed by the narrative excerpt: with no warning, 1 of the prisoners from verwaringheim swings her head down, her fingers gripping the eave of the roof to keep her from toppling over completely. āhi there!ā āgood gods!ā Halvard whips around to face an upside-down Juel. āyou nearly scared my spirit free!ā ādoes that mean your spirit still has cost? it should be worth something.ā she looks concerned, tilting her head to the side and causing her curtain of hair to sway. he blinks. āthatās notānevermind. nevermind. why are you upside-down?ā āiām not upside-down. youāre upside down,ā she giggles. āits all about perspective, prince.ā ājuel, whoāre ya talkinā to?ā the male prisoner grumbles from above. halvardās face blanches. he covers his mouth with his free hand, hoping to communicate to juel not to reveal any specifics of who he is. she grins at him. āitās prince halvard!ā
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The Bardaegan Trials have only just begun; is risking it all worth it? āļøš„
its recruitment szn!
my fave parts abt camp fairwood:
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š welcoming vibes!
š± green meadows cabin <3
š§ learning abt everyoneās kickass projects
š¾ celebrating together!
⨠weekly cabin updates
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officially halfway thru odeās first round of edits š„³
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⢠added a new chapter š
⢠adjusted pacing to be more consistent
#editing
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Castle looming over a beach. āODE: Fern and the Nine Realms of Laerathorā āA Key & Vena Productionā ā12.2025ā āhitting query trenches soon"
š° ODE: FERN AND THE NINE REALMS OF LAERATHOR š°
Nine realms. Ten competitors. One king, fated to die, who insists on overseeing the competition which will determine his successor.
How will this unique round of the Bardaegan Trials end?
#posterpitw #f #na
young woman with a sword. āODE: Fern and the Nine Realms of Laerathorā at the top of the poster, overlaid with the sword. to the womanās right: āCarter Elise Key & Lindsay Venaā āWhat is your idea of vengeance?ā At the bottom: āComing soon to the query trenchesā then, the cast of characters: āFern Riis. Halvard Jostad. Airika Falk. Biggs Stigandr. Brendell Falk. Quinby Brodbeck. Ernaline Gisil. Ygor Wistirgaard. Caxton Rask. Juel Soelberg. Torben Ahlstrom. Lumi Hartvigsen. Eostre Dal."
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āļø Whatās your idea of vengeance? Fern thinks sheās got a pretty good guess, but when those beliefs are tested, they may just crumble under the pressure.
[ hitting query trenches dec 2025 ]
Young blonde woman in a field with the words āODE: Fern and the Nine Realms of Laerathorā behind her in the sky. āmagic infused worldā and ādoomed by fateā are on either side of her. At the bottom: āCarter Elise Key & Lindsay Venaā āComing soon to the query trenches"
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The chance of a lifetimeā some might even kill for it. With everything on the line, Fern, Halvard, and Airika have to decide how they want to be remembered. Everyone wants something, but is risking it all worth it? āļø
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My QueerPit 2025 pitches thread!
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ghost dog!!!
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this looks SO COOL
#queerpit #ef #na #editing
THE CRUEL PRINCE X PRIORY OF THE ORANGE TREE
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š competition for the throne
āļø forged family
š queer & disabled rep
āļø slow burn subplot
on track to hit query trenches dec. 2025
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