📖 "... Ezek éltek és zöldek voltak. Jacob megérintett pár levelet az egyik hosszú ágon. Szinte érezte a benne áramló nedveket."
Végre elkészült a 6. fejezet: soulcatch3r.net/hu/a-menedek...
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📖 "... These were alive, and they were green. Jacob touched a few leaves on one of the long branches. He could almost feel the sap flowing within them."
Chapter 6 is finally finished: soulcatch3r.net/the-sanctuar...
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The dark universe I'm building demands a more refined identity. From now on, the stories on Soulcatch3r will run under the pen name C. S. Hayes. Thanks for sticking with me through this experiment.
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A sokadik átolvasásnál rájönni, hogy a szöveg sántít: kíméletlenül kijózanító. Az elmúlt órákban szálanként szedtem szét a történetet. Feszesebb cselekmény, profibb stilisztika, a logikai bukfenceket kigyomláltam. Feszültség a maximumon.
Frissítve: soulcatch3r.net/hu/a-menedek/
Realizing the text falters after several reads is sobering. Over the past few hours, I’ve deconstructed the story thread by thread: tighter plot, sharper style, logic holes fixed. Tension at its peak.
Updated: soulcatch3r.net/the-sanctuary/
📖 "A másik férfi tekintetén ekkor átvillant valami felismerés féle. Az arca szinte görcsbe rándult és szemei is kitisztulva, szúrón meredtek Jacobra."
Az 5. mérföldkő online: soulcatch3r.net/hu/a-menedek...
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📖 "A spark of something akin to recognition flashed in the other man's eyes. His face almost twisted into a spasm, and his eyes cleared, locking onto Jacob with a piercing glare."
Milestone 5 is online: soulcatch3r.net/the-sanctuar...
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📖 – Annyi mindent kell még tanítanunk neki.
Kiszabadította magát a férfi karjaiból és a legközelebbi ajtóhoz lépett. A nehéz faajtón volt egy kis ablak, ami betekintést engedett a mögötte lévő szobába.
Mi történik a 4. fejezetben? soulcatch3r.net/hu/a-menedek...
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📖 “We still have so much to teach him.”
She freed herself from the man’s arms and stepped over to the nearest door. The heavy wooden door had a small window that allowed a glimpse into the room beyond.
What happens in Chapter 4? soulcatch3r.net/the-sanctuar...
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📖 "Először csak az érzékelés egy része tért vissza – a magas aljnövényzet simogatása az arcán, a párás-nyers levegő szaga, apránként a faágak nyekergő-kattogó hangját is elkezdte hallani." Folytatódik a 3. fejezettel: soulcatch3r.net/hu/a-menedek...
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📖 "At first, only a fraction of his senses returned—the caress of tall undergrowth against his face, the damp-raw smell of the air, and ..." Continued in Chapter 3.: soulcatch3r.net/the-sanctuar...
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I already had a kind of ending in mind for Jacob's story, but yesterday I had some new ideas. The catharsis may take on a new tone.
🇭🇺 Már magyarul is olvashatod: soulcatch3r.net/hu/a-menedek...
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📖 Jacob's story continues in Chapter 2.: soulcatch3r.net/the-sanctuar...
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🇭🇺 Olvasd magyarul is! soulcatch3r.net/hu/a-menedek/
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Will Jacob, trapped between worlds, find the answers before it's too late?⬇
Image of the awakening man lying on the ground in the misty meadow. The landscape around him is unfamiliar yet familiar. The fog covers everything.
📖A foggy dawn roused the man once more as he lay in some far-off meadow. His groggy eyes strained to process the endless megapixels of his surroundings, but his migraine-ravaged brain could find no match for the landscape in his memories.️⬇
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❓If you could go back in time, but only once, and you couldn't come back, what would you bring with you?
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➡️[1/?] She woke alone in the room. Next to her, under the crumpled covers, was only the cold imprint of the man's body. As she looked around, half asleep, a feeling of loneliness and unease began to take hold. ⬇️
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[2/?] The storm outside was gathering strength again. Lightning struck the black night like the crack of a whip. And the trees, howling and cracking, bowed to the wind. It was as if a multitude of curled arthropods were staring up at the sky, dancing madly in the pouring rain. ⬇️
Last night, the wind blew crumbs of today at my feet again. #surrealmoments
There was something in that room. Something about the darkest back corner of that musty library room always gave her the creeps. She didn't like being there. She wished the room didn't exist. [1/?] ⬇️
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[2/?] The trees, the field, even the camphor-like incense of the air felt otherworldly. He was somewhere and yet nowhere. Caught between two worlds. His gaze shifted to his torn shirt sleeve as a thought echoed through his mind, "How the hell did I end up back in this world?"