joyfully splashed in these puddles for 30 min before I had to pull her inside and pour the water out of her shoes 😂

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I help fiction writers shape stronger manuscripts without losing their voice. Empathy-led editing, 🚫AI. Developmental editing ✍️Line editing ✍️Query critiques

- went to the Sacramento book con. It was great to meet fellow writers and readers, and listen in on the panels (always my favorite part).
- @writingbattle JUST started and I read and rated a bunch of stories yesterday, some of which have already stuck with me.
-it’s been rainy here & my daughter…

Toddler splashes in puddles

highlights from this week:
- both of my most-recent clients I performed dev edits for came back with their next draft to work with me on a follow-up manuscript evaluation. It feels good to know they loved working with me, & also just to SEE their writing improve… I’m proud 🥲
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If you think you’re ready to query, don’t let fear hold you back. It only takes one YES. Be sure your book is COMPLETE & polished. Agents may only ask for opening pages but they can request a full at any time. Don’t be the person who replies “I don’t have it.” 1/
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4 You’re ready to hear “no.” Unfortunately, rejection is just part of the game. You will hear a lot of “no”s and even more silence. It’s all part of the process (and it’s generally not fast-moving).

5 you have a strong hook and opening pages. Even if you’re writing quiet lit fic, you should have a strong hook. And EVERYONE needs killer opening pages to keep the requests coming in. Leave them wanting more!

I’m booking clients now for query critiques and query packages (query, 1-2 pg synopsis, first 3k words, and a 1-2 sentence pitch). Comment QUERY below or shoot me a DM! think you’re ready?

Comment QUERY below or send me a DM to book a query critique now! 2/2

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If you think you’re ready to query, don’t let fear hold you back. It only takes one YES. Be sure your book is COMPLETE & polished. Agents may only ask for opening pages but they can request a full at any time. Don’t be the person who replies “I don’t have it.” 1/
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lol I just edited one but it’s not out yet 😅but it’s a cool category!

Oof I feel this so hard. Hope you get some good rest tonight 💛

💯 it’s complicated on purpose! My husband just filed an extension. Are you going to be doing them quarterly? I’m still unclear if that’s required lol. My business was new in 2025 so not much to report.

Exactly 💯

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Chicago ❤️❤️

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Breaking: the President is posting things on social media that would get normal Americans banned or arrested.

This is not normal.

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This program is so special. Now every time we go to the mailbox my 2 year old says she has to go get her book from Dolly 😭she thinks there’s books for her everyday. We’ve built such a love for reading in our house and her language is amazing because of it ❤️

It’s already 85 degrees outside Sacramento and I’m BAKING in the sun 😩this summer is gonna be so rough

My goal is never to replace your voice, but to provide thoughtful critique and encouragement so you walk away with both a stronger manuscript and more confidence as a writer.
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Liza was very communicative during the entire process, which was incredible. She handed me ideas that gave me a specific direction for revising, and I could see the vision of the second draft clearly. She helped put all the puzzle pieces together and fix multiple issues that I knew my MS had but couldn't figure out how to fix on my own. I can't speak highly enough about her edits. [Book title] is going to evolve and become something better because of Liza’s insightful and skillful editing. If you’re in need of an editor for developmental editing, copy and line editing, or help with your querying package, look no further! 10/10 recommend. Nicole Ward testimonial Developmental edits, contemporary romance

Next up in my testimonial series is debut author Nicole Ward. She's working on an enemies-to-lovers sports romance set in the competitive world of esports. I worked with her on developmental edits and I can't wait to read her next draft!

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That’s a great question! I’ve noticed that almost all writers I work with struggle with interiority—what is their MC thinking/feeling? A recent client sent me back her pages after working together and the interiority was sooo well done! I was so proud 🥰it makes a huge difference!

He literally did a naz! salute live on camera… who’s lying??

Although I edit most adult fiction, these are the genres I love to edit (and read)! Regardless of the genre, I excel at anything relationship-based. I’m all about character-based novels that explore the human condition.
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Build worlds in relation to the character. The same things look different depending on who’s looking at it. A local and a tourist won’t experience the same town the same way. What does your character notice or appreciate? What feels normal or strange to them? How does their upbringing influence this?

Pick small details from which readers can infer more about the world. Avoid early info dumps. Instead, weave that information in. Are the roads unpaved and full of potholes? Where do characters spend their time? If you use dialogue to pepper in world-building, be sure not to over-explain. After all, someone living there already knows that. Trust your reader. They don’t need to be shown everything, just enough.

Routine reveals reality Daily life IS world-building. Commutes, meals, work schedules, money stress, childcare, social obligations—these grounding details make any setting feel lived-in. Think about a daily routine in your life and then think about what that looks like for your character.

World-building isn’t about scale, it’s about intention. If you’re unsure whether your setting is working, a developmental edit can help uncover what’s missing. Comment WORLD-BUILDING below or send me a DM to book! Not ready to hire an editor? Follow me for more writing, editing, and querying tips.

World-building can make or break a book, and it’s not just for sci-fi/fantasy. Even when you’re writing romance, the world your characters live in & how they grew up influences their personality, wants, & goals. Struggling with world-building? Send a DM or comment to book today!2/2 #writingcommunity

world- building? Need help with writing tips from a professional editor Hint: this applies to more than just fantasy and sci-fi

Characters are a product of their worlds. Don’t build a world and drop characters into it like scenery. The setting should influence how they think, speak, move, and make choices. It should complicate the story. If the setting can be swapped out without changing the story, it needs more texture. We are informed by the world we come from.

Social rules are world-building Every world has unspoken rules. What’s considered polite, taboo, impressive, or shameful? How people behave in public spaces often tells us more than physical setting.

Power and access shape the world. Who has power and who doesn’t? Who gets opportunities? Who feels safe and who doesn’t? Why? World-building isn’t just geography. It’s systems, privilege, and limits.

World-building can make or break a book, and it’s not just for sci-fi/fantasy. Even when you’re writing romance, the world your characters live in & how they grew up influences their personality, wants, & goals. Struggling with world-building? Send a DM or comment to book today!1/2 #writingcommunity

And finally: you’re supporting a small business. It’s no secret that GenAI companies are owned by billionaires who do not have your best interests (or privacy) at heart. I truly want to see writers succeed. Any money you spend directly supports a small, female-, neurodivergent-owned business. This impacts my family much more than it would a billionaire, and enables me to continue doing my dream job of supporting writers.

Don’t let AI destroy your unique voice (and the planet). Hire me, a real human editor. Not ready to hire an editor? Follow me for tips and writing advice.

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I can guarantee confidentiality. GenAI companies have already settled lawsuits against writers for scraping their words without permission to train their models. My clients sign a contract that guarantees confidentiality and that I have no rights to their intellectual property.

AI only focuses on the question. The reason your query needs to be detailed and well worded is because that’s the only thing it focuses on. I’m also going to focus on why a writer is asking that question and why they approached that question in a particular way.

AI can’t offer video calls. Some writers like to have live discovery calls or post-edit meetings. This is all part of the interpersonal relationship to get a feel for how we’d work together, and to help writers debrief after getting their edit back.

I have a network; AI doesn’t. After 15 years in the industry I have a network of peers in publishing, editorial, marketing, and communications. I can leverage that network to help provide information on the industry and help you with marketing strategy. If your genre isn’t one I work with, I can refer you to a colleague.

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The benefits of working with a human editor: what I can provide that AI can’t.

I’m not just providing a service. It’s an interpersonal relationship built on trust & mutual understanding. My extensive edit letter isn’t only going to help you revise the novel you hired me for, but will help you improve your craft and confidence in your ability for future novels. I’m a coach and mentor, offering encouragement, motivation, and constrcutive criticism. I center the client and support my writer’s goals. I’m focused on the editorial needs of the writer, not just the writing.

AI can’t be a sensitivity reader. AI does not have lived experience. I can immediately pick up on nuances that a computer just can’t. Is the tone off? Is your joke landing? What about the minute movements of facial expressions and what they mean? I bring ethical judgment and subjectivity in an emotionally intelligent way.

AI does not know the rules of your niche. Certain genres follow rules and structure guidelines. Does AI know that romance novels should end with a HEA/HFN, and that cheating is frowned upon? What about the rules of magic systems in fantasy? I understand these intricacies, and the changing desires of the publishing industry.

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Proofreading The last look. This service focuses on surface-level issues only: lingering typos, missing or repeated words, punctuation slips, inconsistent spacing or formatting, and small mechnical issues that can distract a reader. A final once-over that ensures your work goes out clear, clean, and distraction-free. Writers who already have a fully edited, production-ready manuscript. For those who are self-publishing, preparing to upload print files, or sending final materials to an anthology, publication or printer. Manuscripts that have already gone through developmental, line, and copyediting. What is it? Ideal for:

Query Submission Package revisionroom.net Leave an agent wanting more. A review of the typical query package: query letter, 1-2 pg. synopsis, first 3k words, and a 1-2 sentence pitch. Notes and suggestions on each piece to help you snag your dream agent. Details and helpful tools for querying. Writers about to start querying, or those who have been querying with limited success. The querying process is TOUGH. While no editor can guarantee you’ll sign with an agent, this can give you your best shot at success (whatever that may look like for you), and help to elevate your craft. What is it? Ideal for: If you’re only interested in one of these elements, such as opening pages or query letter, reach out and I’ll create a unique package for you.

Beta Reading Fresh eyes, honest insight. Big-picture reader feedback on pacing, plot clarity, character depth, world-building, and overall engagement. Includes a high-level feedback summary highlighting what’s working well and what may need strengthening before your next revision. Does not include sentence-level edits or an in-depth reader’s report like you’d receive with a developmental edit. Early drafts Budget-conscious writers Anyone looking to understand how their story lands with a thoughtful, experienced reader. What is it? Ideal for:

Still not sure? If you’re still not sure which service is right for you, or you’d like something not listed here, send me a DM or email me at revisionroomeditorial@gmail.com. I can’t wait to step into the Revision Room with you and I’m honored to be part of your writing journey. Not looking for editing services right now? That’s ok! Save this post and come back to it when you need it, or recommend me to a friend. Follow along for more writing, editing, and querying tips.

Learn more about our services, continued. I'm always coming up with new services writers need so be sure to check our site revisionroom.net.

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First 10k Words revisionroom.net Hook your audience from page one. Line edits & light developmental feedback on your first 10k words Includes in-line comments & a brief summary of key observations. We’ll look at pacing, tone, worldbuilding, whether your story begins in the right place, and how effectively it hooks the reader. Writers preparing to query agents Indie authors beginning their self edits before publishing Those working on a tight budget or timeline What is it? Ideal for: Bonus: If you also book a full edit after this service, you’ll receive a discounted rate.

Developmental Edit revisionroom.net Big-picture feedback to level up your work. A big-picture deep-dive into your manuscript You’ll receive in-line comments throughout and a detailed editorial report with actionable notes on character, pacing, stakes, dialogue, world-building, structure, and more to help guide your next revision. Strengthens your voice and storytelling craft and helps to reveal blind spots you can’t see on your own. Writers who have done a round or two of revisions and aren’t sure how to further refine their MS Writers preparing to query or self-publish Those seeking clarity on pacing, structure, or character arcs Anyone wanting to elevate their craft with professional insight What is it? Ideal for: Bonus: If you book line/copy edits or a query review after this service, you’ll receive a discounted rate.

Copy Edits revisionroom.net Typos, begone. A line-by-line, word-by-word edit (in Chicago style) focused on technical corrections such as grammar, punctuation, spelling, tense, subject-verb agreement, dialogue tag usage, and consistency of spelling and punctuation. A check for minor formatting issues You’ll receive a detailed style sheet outlining consistency choices, general feedback, and a few words of support. The last step in the publishing process, it’s ideal for indie authors who are about to publish. The final cleanup for a MS that has gone through previous rounds of revisions and big-picture edits. Those who struggle with the finer points of grammar. What is it? Ideal for: For indie authors about to publish, I recommend a combined line- and copyediting service.

Line Edits revisionroom.net Level up your language. More stylistic in nature than copyedits A full line-by-line edit focused on flow, clarity, word choice, repetition/overused words or phrases, and awkward tone or language at the sentence level. Sentence order may be adjusted for improved pacing, tone, or emotional impact, and wordy scenes will be pared down. Writers with a solid grasp of grammar but who struggle with flow and pacing at the sentence level. A MS that has already gone through big picture-revisions and now needs stylistic refinement. Writers preparing to query who want polished, professional-level writing in their sample pages. Writers seeking to elevate the artistry of their sentences and strengthen their overall craft. What is it? Ideal for: For indie authors about to publish, I recommend a combined line- and copyediting service.

My goal is to help writers achieve their dreams and hone their craft to build confidence in their own unique voice. If you think something is out of your budget or not the right fit, let’s chat!

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