It wasn’t even an early draft... But I guess I leveled up in the meantime.
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Continued with revisions and ended up rewriting the whole chapter... How could I have ever sent this to a beta reader? The shame goes deep. But it will be better.
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Well maybe I should sent over a friend with a shovel? I mean... It's a lot of work for just a morning.
Maybe it's the books I read... But my first thought was why you need to move a body first thing in the morning 👀
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#revpit is over. Normal life starts again (sort of).
Diving back into revisions and polishing my imperfections... ✍️✨
Share your frustrations! Is it #amquerying, #procrastination, or #ImposterSyndrome ?
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No problem, it’s not everyone’s cup of tea.🫖
It’s a slow-burn, high-spice paranormal romance…
Around three to four 🌶️ on most spice scales.
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Does your MSWL reflect your full range for copyediting? My MS is a 🌶️ romance, so I want to be sure that’s a fit for you. 👀
Haha, I definitely want to reach all English readers, but I guess I’m just stubborn like that!
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Question for the #RevPit crew: Which of you amazing editors offer UK English copyediting? 🇬🇧
I would love to use one of the #RevPit services, but I need to make sure my "Britishisms" are in safe hands! 😬
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And my struggle is giving the reader more information without it annoying me.
But... It’s not just about big info dumps, but also avoiding overly obvious ones.
She’s sees his blue eyes miles away (yeah, right), or a skinny person turns into a ramble about the MC’s own size, or when they know someone is 6'2" just by looking at them.
Personally, I get annoyed by intentionally “accidental” worldbuilding.
“I’d like to eat there, but they serve pork and I’m Muslim.” that’s a no for me.
“Too bad they don’t serve halal.” that’s great, because I can fill in the blanks.
A hockey stick already tells me what sport you play.
Already corrected some stupid mistakes...
I'm in the line-editing phase, so there shouldn't be any big changes to my MS.😐
I'm going to dive into editing....
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I'm sparse with world building details, because I hate info dumps when reading. I always skip those, and all the info repeats that follow.
But one of my feedback is that my beta readers would like more world building. How do I find that balance?
Definitely a Pantser. I have a broad outline that might not even be followed, and all these side characters that just pop up at unexpected moments.
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I just noticed I’m only a few followers away from 600 👀
Help me hit this milestone and I’ll drop a brand-new snippet of your choosing…
Will it be the shifter slow-burn, the RH werewolf isekai, or the grimdark dragon romance? 🔥
Like, share, and tell me what you want!
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Hey Leah,
With a romance, do you need to give the GMC of the LI if you don't write from their POV's?
Thanks!
I have art on commission, but it's still in the sketch phase... 🎨 can't show you anything yet.
In the meantime, I have a map for you from my grimdark dragon romance! 🐉🔥
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Hide or flight always protected the shifter Robin. When the stoic Beta, Wulf, dares to breach her walls, she faces a choice: stab him for the insult of his kindness—if only she had something pointy—or do the terrifying thing and trust him. Avoiding disappointment is safe. Caring means more to lose.
This week...
It's the reason I’ve stopped ARC reading for the moment. Maybe I’m too critical now that I write my own stories and know my own pitfalls (and recognise them in others), but 4 out of 5 end up as a DNF.