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Posts by Freyja Dunkirk

It wasn’t even an early draft... But I guess I leveled up in the meantime.

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Continued with revisions and ended up rewriting the whole chapter... How could I have ever sent this to a beta reader? The shame goes deep. But it will be better.

#writerslife #writingcommunity

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Well maybe I should sent over a friend with a shovel? I mean... It's a lot of work for just a morning.

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Maybe it's the books I read... But my first thought was why you need to move a body first thing in the morning 👀

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I can't send you a DM! Could you follow me back or open them?

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#revpit is over. Normal life starts again (sort of).

Diving back into revisions and polishing my imperfections... ✍️✨

Share your frustrations! Is it #amquerying, #procrastination, or #ImposterSyndrome ?

#writerslife #writercommunity

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No problem, it’s not everyone’s cup of tea.🫖

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It’s a slow-burn, high-spice paranormal romance…
Around three to four 🌶️ on most spice scales.

😎👀

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Does your MSWL reflect your full range for copyediting? My MS is a 🌶️ romance, so I want to be sure that’s a fit for you. 👀

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Haha, I definitely want to reach all English readers, but I guess I’m just stubborn like that!

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Question for the #RevPit crew: Which of you amazing editors offer UK English copyediting? 🇬🇧

I would love to use one of the #RevPit services, but I need to make sure my "Britishisms" are in safe hands! 😬

#RevPit #WritingCommunity #AmWriting

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And my struggle is giving the reader more information without it annoying me.

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But... It’s not just about big info dumps, but also avoiding overly obvious ones.

She’s sees his blue eyes miles away (yeah, right), or a skinny person turns into a ramble about the MC’s own size, or when they know someone is 6'2" just by looking at them.

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Personally, I get annoyed by intentionally “accidental” worldbuilding.

“I’d like to eat there, but they serve pork and I’m Muslim.” that’s a no for me.

“Too bad they don’t serve halal.” that’s great, because I can fill in the blanks.

A hockey stick already tells me what sport you play.

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Already corrected some stupid mistakes...

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I'm in the line-editing phase, so there shouldn't be any big changes to my MS.😐

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I'm going to dive into editing....

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GUESS WHAT TODAY IS #RevPit WRITERS ✨️👀

winners will be announced at 12 PM EST!

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I'm sparse with world building details, because I hate info dumps when reading. I always skip those, and all the info repeats that follow.

But one of my feedback is that my beta readers would like more world building. How do I find that balance?

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Definitely a Pantser. I have a broad outline that might not even be followed, and all these side characters that just pop up at unexpected moments.

#revpitwaiting #writerslive

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I just noticed I’m only a few followers away from 600 👀

Help me hit this milestone and I’ll drop a brand-new snippet of your choosing…
Will it be the shifter slow-burn, the RH werewolf isekai, or the grimdark dragon romance? 🔥

Like, share, and tell me what you want!

#RefPitWaiting #SpicyRomance

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Hey Leah,

With a romance, do you need to give the GMC of the LI if you don't write from their POV's?

Thanks!

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I have art on commission, but it's still in the sketch phase... 🎨 can't show you anything yet.

In the meantime, I have a map for you from my grimdark dragon romance! 🐉🔥

#RevPitWaiting #SneakPeek #WritersLife #SpicyRomance

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Hide or flight always protected the shifter Robin. When the stoic Beta, Wulf, dares to breach her walls, she faces a choice: stab him for the insult of his kindness—if only she had something pointy—or do the terrifying thing and trust him. Avoiding disappointment is safe. Caring means more to lose.

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This week...

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It's the reason I’ve stopped ARC reading for the moment. Maybe I’m too critical now that I write my own stories and know my own pitfalls (and recognise them in others), but 4 out of 5 end up as a DNF.

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