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Posts by Luci Olivia Fitzpatrick - Screenwriter

Is it a writing day if I just organised my trauma into scenes?

#scriptsky #scriptsky+

11 months ago 9 0 1 0

Cheers! Appreciate it

1 year ago 5 0 0 0

I think my younger self would probably wonder what took me so long to try again as an adult. And I'd like to think they'd be impressed but she was 'too cool' to be impressed.

1 year ago 3 0 1 0
EXT. FOREST - DAY
A low mist rolls through ancient trees with thick trunks. The
dense canopy dulls any noise from beyond the forest.
SUPER: Isle of Man, 1705.
TWO BLACKBIRDS flutter by. They swoop low, land together on:
-- A DECAPITATED HEAD. Days old, congealed at the neck.
Nearby lies TALDA (30s), her muscles bursting from under her
war town armour. What hasn't killed her has definitely made
her stronger.
Talda awakes with a SHARP GASP. The blackbirds scatter.
She pushes herself up to her knees and SPITS out dirt. With a
frown, she checks around her - where the hell is she?
Unsure, she reaches for her BATTLE AXE but freezes at:
-- A WOLF. A snarling beast of matted fur and sharp teeth.
Talda's eyes scan the trees for its pack.
TALDA
You alone?
She follows its gaze to 'the head', raises her eyebrow -
TALDA (CONT'D)
You hungry?
-- The Wolf GROWLS but Talda shakes her head -
TALDA (CONT'D)
Any other time, I would. But I
gotta get paid on this one.
She slowly reaches into her pouch, holds up a morsel of cured
meat. She finds her feet, no sudden movements.
She HURLS the meat into the distance, between trees. The Wolf
BOLTS, chasing after it... disappearing into the mist.

EXT. FOREST - DAY A low mist rolls through ancient trees with thick trunks. The dense canopy dulls any noise from beyond the forest. SUPER: Isle of Man, 1705. TWO BLACKBIRDS flutter by. They swoop low, land together on: -- A DECAPITATED HEAD. Days old, congealed at the neck. Nearby lies TALDA (30s), her muscles bursting from under her war town armour. What hasn't killed her has definitely made her stronger. Talda awakes with a SHARP GASP. The blackbirds scatter. She pushes herself up to her knees and SPITS out dirt. With a frown, she checks around her - where the hell is she? Unsure, she reaches for her BATTLE AXE but freezes at: -- A WOLF. A snarling beast of matted fur and sharp teeth. Talda's eyes scan the trees for its pack. TALDA You alone? She follows its gaze to 'the head', raises her eyebrow - TALDA (CONT'D) You hungry? -- The Wolf GROWLS but Talda shakes her head - TALDA (CONT'D) Any other time, I would. But I gotta get paid on this one. She slowly reaches into her pouch, holds up a morsel of cured meat. She finds her feet, no sudden movements. She HURLS the meat into the distance, between trees. The Wolf BOLTS, chasing after it... disappearing into the mist.

This is the script that set A LOT in motion for me -

#FirstPageFriday #scriptsky #scriptsky+

1 year ago 10 0 1 0

What would your younger self say if they read your latest script? #scriptsky #scriptsky+

1 year ago 3 0 2 0

Diving into patch 8 of #bg3
If that makes sense to you, we should be friends :)

1 year ago 0 0 0 0

Do you ever think about how many incredible scripts are just sitting in inbox purgatory because someone forgot to follow up? #scriptsky #scriptsky+

1 year ago 9 0 1 0
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The oxford comma is often a dead giveaway.

I know it's right, but a lot of real folk don't use them.

1 year ago 4 0 2 0

They're stepping stones, each one making you stronger, faster, smarter. Without the first nine steps, you can't take the tenth one.

1 year ago 6 1 0 0

I'm in need of a new TV show to watch.

Something 'shut-your-curtains-and-put-your-phone-down-GOOD' to replace the Severance sized hole in my brain.

1 year ago 0 0 0 0

Reminds me of learning how to sprint in my SECOND Skyrim run...

1 year ago 1 0 0 0

People just be looking for the easiest, quickest way in. But it's the effort you put in that makes you worthy of the success.

1 year ago 2 0 0 0

Do you ever open up your writing software and feel like you’re just staring into a casket, wondering what went wrong? #scriptsky #scriptsky+

1 year ago 3 0 0 0

Gotta get that brain all juiced up before the typey types happen

1 year ago 1 0 1 0

hey husband, I need to trap myself in the office and write until i feel like pulling my hair out...

Him: cool, playstation's free then?

1 year ago 0 0 0 0

Screenwriting - the only job where staring at a wall for 6 hours feels productive #scriptsky #scriptsky+

1 year ago 20 1 1 1
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Summer goth wearing sunglasses outside house (dying in the heat)

Summer goth wearing sunglasses outside house (dying in the heat)

If you squint, you can see my doggy sunbathing

1 year ago 3 0 0 0

Thank you. I hope so too

1 year ago 0 0 0 0

As a screenwriter with social difficulties (anxiety and other yet-diagnosed frustrating things), navigating the industry (or life) is like trying to swim through treacle. It's just not designed for people like me.

This book sounds up my alley... purchased. Thank you @robinince.bsky.social

1 year ago 3 0 1 0

People say ‘kill your darlings’ like I haven’t already buried thousands in the woods... #scriptsky

1 year ago 5 0 0 0

For every Last of Us, there's an Assassin's Creed. I don't mind it dying if they can't do it justice

1 year ago 1 0 0 0

OH my days, what a game. There's a song on the soundtrack I can't listen to without bursting into tears. It's been a long time since a game got me that hard

1 year ago 0 0 0 0

You playing anything good at the moment?

1 year ago 0 0 1 0
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For anyone who needs it -

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1 year ago 14 4 1 0

hey hey
your url doesn't work, FYI

1 year ago 0 0 0 0
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Not bragging but getting ‘great writing, amazing world building, we love it… but not for us’ is kinda my vibe... #scriptsky

1 year ago 6 0 0 0

It’s just a long, meditative pause while the soul reboots and you find the will to press on

1 year ago 0 0 1 0

I grew up in a midlands town, responsible for building St Pancras for our industry but ain't nobody giving us credit

1 year ago 0 0 0 0

The opposite is happening for me. It's just too darn bright to play video games in my pjs.

1 year ago 0 0 1 0

Do you also hate what you did? That's key.

1 year ago 1 0 0 0