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INT TILTED FLAGON GREATROOM - NIGHT
Evan and Astriana enter from upstairs, just in time to catch the tail end of the epic ballad being sung by BARDS in a corner. Several people are dancing a subdued dance to the song. Evan does a double-take, which Astriana notices.
ASTRIANA
Is everything alright?
EVAN
(blinks)
Oh, yeah. I just haven't heard bardcore in a long time.
ASTRIANA
Bardcore?
EVAN
It's what we call this type of music in my world.
Astriana grins.
ASTRIANA
Is it not to your taste?
EVAN
It's fine. Just a surprise.
Just then the lead singer announces the group will be taking a short break. The dance floor empties. Darl passes by waiting tables and overhears.
DARL
If you ask them nicely, perhaps they could loan you an instrument to play something from your world?
Evan chuckles. 
EVAN
Oh I don't play.
But a thought occurs to him...
EVAN
But Darl, you wouldn't happen to have a glass bowl, would you?
Darl considers a moment.
DARL
I believe I do, actually.

INT TILTED FLAGON GREATROOM - NIGHT Evan and Astriana enter from upstairs, just in time to catch the tail end of the epic ballad being sung by BARDS in a corner. Several people are dancing a subdued dance to the song. Evan does a double-take, which Astriana notices. ASTRIANA Is everything alright? EVAN (blinks) Oh, yeah. I just haven't heard bardcore in a long time. ASTRIANA Bardcore? EVAN It's what we call this type of music in my world. Astriana grins. ASTRIANA Is it not to your taste? EVAN It's fine. Just a surprise. Just then the lead singer announces the group will be taking a short break. The dance floor empties. Darl passes by waiting tables and overhears. DARL If you ask them nicely, perhaps they could loan you an instrument to play something from your world? Evan chuckles. EVAN Oh I don't play. But a thought occurs to him... EVAN But Darl, you wouldn't happen to have a glass bowl, would you? Darl considers a moment. DARL I believe I do, actually.

Bustles off to the kitchen and returns with a decent-sized glass bowl. Evan removes his cell phone from a pocket and checks the battery. It reads 81% but no signal. He pulls up his music app and scrolls through a few songs.
EVAN
(mutters)
I'm glad I downloaded my favorites.
He finally selects one and hits Play. Then he sets the phone in the glass bowl, which amplifies the music, on the stage.
Song starts out diegetic in the bowl, then shifts to soundtrack. What follows is a big, bombastic dance number. It is an upbeat celebration of life. Big smiles and cathartic, athletic dancing everywhere.
***Suggested song would be either Body Talks by the Struts or, for cultural flavor, Ricky Martin's She Bangs, as Evan is also of Puerto Rican descent.***
It starts off with Evan throwing down some slick dance moves as the song begins. If Body Talks, the dancing should be somewhat freestyle Hollywood musical style. If She Bangs: bachata, salsa, Latin freestyle, etc.
If Body Talks, Evan lip-syncs the line "Cuz I'm gonna be it tonight" while looking at Astriana across the dance floor. If She Bangs, the line "Now you're hitting my heart like a drum, yeah baby."
As Evan dances, Astriana moves her head to the rhythm, then her body, then her feet. She watches Evan's dance moves attentively, and then jumps in with him by the first chorus, matching him move-for-move. 
As they dance, the rest of the patrons start to jam to the music, and join the dance floor in twos and threes as the song builds, until by the final verse/chorus after the bridge, the whole place is rockin'.
At one point, a 'backup' dancer or two come forward to perform an energetic dance solo while Evan and Astriana drop temporarily back into the 'backup' section.
Even Tessa dances slightly as she does her cooking, and Darl sees this and smiles proudly at her. At the end of the song, everyone is panting, sweaty, and euphoric. There are hugs, forearm shakes, and high-fives all around.
Astriana laughs in genuine happiness.

Bustles off to the kitchen and returns with a decent-sized glass bowl. Evan removes his cell phone from a pocket and checks the battery. It reads 81% but no signal. He pulls up his music app and scrolls through a few songs. EVAN (mutters) I'm glad I downloaded my favorites. He finally selects one and hits Play. Then he sets the phone in the glass bowl, which amplifies the music, on the stage. Song starts out diegetic in the bowl, then shifts to soundtrack. What follows is a big, bombastic dance number. It is an upbeat celebration of life. Big smiles and cathartic, athletic dancing everywhere. ***Suggested song would be either Body Talks by the Struts or, for cultural flavor, Ricky Martin's She Bangs, as Evan is also of Puerto Rican descent.*** It starts off with Evan throwing down some slick dance moves as the song begins. If Body Talks, the dancing should be somewhat freestyle Hollywood musical style. If She Bangs: bachata, salsa, Latin freestyle, etc. If Body Talks, Evan lip-syncs the line "Cuz I'm gonna be it tonight" while looking at Astriana across the dance floor. If She Bangs, the line "Now you're hitting my heart like a drum, yeah baby." As Evan dances, Astriana moves her head to the rhythm, then her body, then her feet. She watches Evan's dance moves attentively, and then jumps in with him by the first chorus, matching him move-for-move. As they dance, the rest of the patrons start to jam to the music, and join the dance floor in twos and threes as the song builds, until by the final verse/chorus after the bridge, the whole place is rockin'. At one point, a 'backup' dancer or two come forward to perform an energetic dance solo while Evan and Astriana drop temporarily back into the 'backup' section. Even Tessa dances slightly as she does her cooking, and Darl sees this and smiles proudly at her. At the end of the song, everyone is panting, sweaty, and euphoric. There are hugs, forearm shakes, and high-fives all around. Astriana laughs in genuine happiness.

ASTRIANA
That was amazing! You are an excellent dancer, Evan.
He grins at her.
EVAN
You're not so bad yourself.
ASTRIANA
I am exhausted after that. I believe I shall retire for the evening.
He nods.
EVAN
I'll second that. 
They exit upstairs.

ASTRIANA That was amazing! You are an excellent dancer, Evan. He grins at her. EVAN You're not so bad yourself. ASTRIANA I am exhausted after that. I believe I shall retire for the evening. He nods. EVAN I'll second that. They exit upstairs.

So for #FirstPageFriday / #FunPagesFriday I added a scene to my epic romantasy, MOONLIGHT.

It needed a dance scene, and I needed to learn how to write a dance scene, so if you need to learn how to write a dance scene, this is the heavily-researched script method of dance-sceneing. #ScriptSky

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Calling back with today's #FunPagesFriday #FirstPageFriday

Character intro for my superhero comedy, SECRET.

Her superpower, you might ask?

Directed negative happenstance.

She can consciously cause people to have bad luck.

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INT. DINING ROOM - NIGHT
Greg enters as Eddie and Bobbi set the table.
Vanessa sets a large bowl of black spaghetti on the table, followed by another large bowl of "meatballs", except they're all shaped like bats, ghosts, and witches' hats. She flashes Greg another smile.
GREG
Good evening everyone.
BOBBI
(in a posh accent)
Why hello, Mister Greg. How goes your evening?
Greg puts on a 'simple country lawyer' accent.
GREG
Why it goes quite well, thank you, Miss Roberta.
Bobbi giggles as she finishes setting the silverware. Greg smiles and waves at Eddie, who turns away shyly and runs into the kitchen, nearly running into Vanessa as she comes out with a bowl of sauce.
VANESSA
Easy, little man.
She spots Greg still in mid-wave, and smiles apologetically.
VANESSA
He's a little shy around strangers.
GREG
Really? I never would have guessed.
Vanessa laughs.
VANESSA
I guess it is a bit obvious.
(calls to kitchen)
Eddie, come back out here. It's dinner time.
Eddie reluctantly comes back out of the kitchen, side-eyeing Greg the whole time.
GREG
It's okay, buddy. I don't bite.

INT. DINING ROOM - NIGHT Greg enters as Eddie and Bobbi set the table. Vanessa sets a large bowl of black spaghetti on the table, followed by another large bowl of "meatballs", except they're all shaped like bats, ghosts, and witches' hats. She flashes Greg another smile. GREG Good evening everyone. BOBBI (in a posh accent) Why hello, Mister Greg. How goes your evening? Greg puts on a 'simple country lawyer' accent. GREG Why it goes quite well, thank you, Miss Roberta. Bobbi giggles as she finishes setting the silverware. Greg smiles and waves at Eddie, who turns away shyly and runs into the kitchen, nearly running into Vanessa as she comes out with a bowl of sauce. VANESSA Easy, little man. She spots Greg still in mid-wave, and smiles apologetically. VANESSA He's a little shy around strangers. GREG Really? I never would have guessed. Vanessa laughs. VANESSA I guess it is a bit obvious. (calls to kitchen) Eddie, come back out here. It's dinner time. Eddie reluctantly comes back out of the kitchen, side-eyeing Greg the whole time. GREG It's okay, buddy. I don't bite.

VANESSA
Pity.
Greg does a double-take.
GREG
I'm sorry?
VANESSA
(grinning mischievously)
Apology accepted.

VANESSA Pity. Greg does a double-take. GREG I'm sorry? VANESSA (grinning mischievously) Apology accepted.

Good morning, #scriptsky. Time for #FunPagesFriday frrom my untitled romcom.

Setup: our hero, Greg, is staying at a B&B run by Vanessa, the love interest, a Londoner who moved to Virginia with her fraternal twins, Eddie and Bobbi. Bobbi had told Greg they were having "spookghetti" for dinner.

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#FunPagesFriday from my #StarWars pilot spec:

DROID WORLD
A Droid built to wield the Force escapes and the New Republic vows to recapture him. When a hidden planet of free Droids makes him an offer he can't refuse, he'll do whatever it takes to unleash his full potential

#Screenwriting #Scriptsky

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Joining in on #FunPagesFriday

This from my spec sequel to #BigTroubleInLittleChina:

JACK BURTON: MONSTER HUNTER

Staple your hats to your fuckin' heads, folks... this is NOT the Werewolf experience your mother warned you about!

#Horror #JackBurton #Sequel #Screenwriting #Scriptsky #TheStuntList

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#funpagesfriday gets dark.
AVAILABLE LIGHT
A once-successful photographer, blinded after a family betrayal, begins photographing suicides and descends into artistic obsession and existential despair, to be drawn into The Circle—a movement that views suicide as a moral act and a form of liberation.

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Page 21 of the screenplay.

In the tradition of @timwestland.bsky.social - #FunPagesFriday from 𝘈 𝘚𝘢𝘧𝘦 𝘏𝘰𝘶𝘴𝘦 𝘰𝘯 𝘙𝘶𝘦 𝘈𝘣𝘦𝘭.

After a deadly pandemic locks down the city of Paris, a blown CIA operative with an encrypted data drive is forced to share her off-books safe house with a potentially deceptive Agency asset.

#scriptsky

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