... Poor Jaewon being uncomfortable bc Hyunoh's family *isn't* dysfunctional af, so he doesn't know how to react to anything. 🥺 #PuppyEverAfter
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Just read the first #PuppyEverAfter side story.
Pros: Uncensored!
Cons: Kinda mad Youngwoon was not informed of all the work Gyujin put into their anniversary that he didn't even bother to notice before he stormed out in a huff. Like, Gyujin might, but I don't accept your uninformed apology, bruh.
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It's his mum that's the angry Chihuahua, ain't it? (Yes, I am aware ‘angry Chihuahua’ is redundant. 💀) #PuppyEverAfter
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It's hilarious that Hyunoh still thinks he's putting on a convincing act when Jaewon has seen him drunk (and thus uninhibited) multiple times now. 😂😅 #PuppyEverAfter
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Cet SFX est en français. Il devrait plutôt indiquer ‘blink’. 👀🇫🇷 #PuppyEverAfter #AMushroomEdits
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(SFX is in French. It should say ‘blink’, tho.
Also, I used a translator. If it's wrong, Google Translate needs to rethink its life choices. 💀💀
... Helps to not typo the single French word I typed.)
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I always wonder about redundancy like this. 🤔🤨 #PuppyEverAfter #AMushroomEdits (Early Morning Edition)
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Fun(?) Fact: So much time passed between me reading s01 and s02 of #PuppyEverAfter that I spent *all* of s02 wondering who Jaewon and Hyunoh were in relation to Gyujin and Youngwoon.
And, in fact, only have just realised properly bc I've just re-read s01.
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And here's the reason* I started re-reading #PuppyEverAfter... I so, so love Youngjin's veil, but, ya know... When they're used in a BL, it's almost always the uke wearing it.
But not with Gyujin and Youngwoon. Our puppy seme got the veil in their wedding, and it's so adorbs! 😚 #TheOriginOfSpecies
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Gyujin driving a Lambo just doesn't really fit. 🤔 The BMW he drove when he went on a trip with Youngwoon made more sense. He seems more the luxury sedan rather than luxury sport type. #PuppyEverAfter
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You wouldn't use ‘never too late’ in this way.
You could drop the ‘to do it now’, perhaps end the sentence with an ellipsis, and go with the implied meaning (since Gyujin even has his hand poised).
Alternatively, it could be switched to ‘not too late’. (1/2) #PuppyEverAfter #AMushroomEdits
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More from this conversation (in ep36):
These three 💬 are supposed to be one long compound sentence, which is fine, but that ‘also’ is problematic. It lacks the structure on its own to continue the cohesive flow of what's being said. (1/2) #PuppyEverAfter #AMushroomEdits
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A hyphen is needed here, as the word is actually ‘off-putting’. So not only is said hyphen needed for the word in general, but it's technically broken onto two lines, so it's needed for that, too. #PuppyEverAfter #AMushroomEdits (Early Morning Edition)
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The word we want here is ‘liquid’. He needs ‘liquid courage’ to ‘get [his] mouth moving’. 🍻 #PuppyEverAfter #AMushroomEdits (Early Morning Edition)
dictionary.cambridge.org/dictionary/e...
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Oh, and out of the same chapter as the last post (23, for anyone interested) we've got this thingie that should actually say ‘place’. 💁 #PuppyEverAfter #AMushroomEdits
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The word ‘have’ is missing here. It could go either before or after the ‘only’, though I think the latter would read better. #PuppyEverAfter #AMushroomEdits
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Title card for ep22 looks a little... non-English-y. 👀 #PuppyEverAfter #AMushroomEdits
(I haven't re-read this since I started doing editing posts [iirc], but I feel like I did point this out on Twt when the ep was new...? Or maybe it's just false déjà vu. 💀🤷)
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New SFX dropped: ‘slupp’. 😛
Pretty sure it should be ‘slurp’, but, on the other hand, ‘slupp’ isn't a bad SFX for a blowjob, actually. 🤔😗 #PuppyEverAfter #AMushroomEdits
(Got the hashtag right this time. Ya know, it's even worse that I fucked it up on an editing post... 😭)
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Man... I forgot how infuriatingly dense Gyujin is at the start of this story... 🫠 #PuppyEverAfter
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🐶Wild Wednesday🐶
Title: Puppy Every After
Creator: ongsim
Platform: Lezhin
Status: Complete
#puppyeverafter #ongsim #puppylove #animalhybrid #childhoodfriends #crush #bl #BoysLove #fyp #rottengirlsreviews #skyeboo13
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Well...did you sing?✨️
#puppyeverafter #baits #dawnofthedragon #pawsandclaws #thefoxsloverefresher #cheekyhabitsofmyrabbits
#myoneandonly #manhwa #blmanhwa #bl
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