Dear Jacqueline Aquarius Starling, Hi. Your alternate history story "STORMGHOULS" is fucking terrible. I mean, for one thing, your villain is ridiculous. Donald Trump is a sexual predator, a fascist, a racist, a capitalist elite, and it's implied that he might be a pedophile? Isn't that a little over the top? Second, America was always going to go through a communist revolution by 1940, it was just inevitable. Third, this "Hitler" guy is just a version of Otto Strasser who's even more evil and even more capitalist, and he's pretty much a cartoon. Someone like that would never, ever get into power. People just wouldn't let him. On top of that, "Hitler" starts a war that he can't win, just for what, plot convenience? If he had like a single brain cell he'd do what Strasser did and create a continental power bloc, then he'd at least get a few decades of rule before his shit collapsed. Why didn't Hitler do that in your story? Is he stupid? Is there lore? Fourth, the fall of the Soviet Union would never happen. The Soviet Union, as the cradle of worldwide revolution and one of the most industrialized, powerful nations in the world, wouldn't fall, especially not to an America run by a cowboy actor and the son of Prescott fucking Bush. That clown car would get eaten alive by the USSR. Oh, and speaking of the USSR, let's talk about the guy you have running capitalist Russia...

In summary, your writing fucking sucks and I invite you to the Chatty Cafe, where we can make tea together, I can tell you how crap your ridiculous and poorly-researched whackjob nightmare story is, and then I can suck your dick. God I love butches. Fuck you, Kendra Krakowski Harding

From a T4T, #fluff, #romance draft I'm working on:

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