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#CRPSugarGliders
Hi, guys. I'm 62, Director of Pubs by trade (I lay out magazines), and I'm working on my 5th book (4th MG). I've been in the querying trenches for the last decade with little or no success, but my amazing editor @mariatureaud.bsky.social assures me it's not me; it's the market.
WIP is the sequel to my #amquerying book:
Heâs 10. He doesnât have fae abilities. Just scrap metal, tools, a sprite who smells magic, and a broken robot. To save his fae friends from the Anti-Fae League, Edison must become the hero heâs been trying to build.
#CampRevPit #CampKickoff #CRPSugarGliders
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This is an amazing opportunity. Are there plans to continue this offering in the future, possibly for non-BIPOC mentees?
Please do not use the #MSWL hashtag for your promotional posts. This tag is exclusively for literary agents to post their wishlists, and we donât want to clog up the feed with non-wishlist posts. Thank you!
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This is what Bluesky is for. Post your successes; make that feeling go viral!
I got my first full request today, too, on my #MG Elf Punk.
#amquerying
Just received my first full request on my #MG Elf Punk Fantasy, EDISON SKROOLUSE AND THE JUNKYARD BODYGUARD after 31 queries and 6 form rejections.
Now, there are 3 agents I queried who noted I should notify them if I receive a full request. Letâs see if I can make this thing go viral! #amquerying
Chapter One:
âI can smell magic, mate ... and I smell some right now!â
Chapter Two:
"It would seem our home is under a wee bit of an attack.â
Chapter Three:
The note was signed with a big, red âW.â
#amquerying #MG #KidLit #Writesky #MGBookChat
That's a fine wish, but here's the thing: by the time you've finished writing, workshopping, editing, and revising this magic novel, the industry will have moved on to the next thing. Or more likely, the agent will have connected with a book already written. Write your passion. Your time will come.
Problem #1: agents have no reason to sign you if they canât read a book youâve written.
Problem #2: by the time you write the book theyâre looking for, they will have found a dozen that were already written and/or that trend will be over.
I hesitate to call her an âanimal,â but 10yo Kitomi is a kitsune (her other 6 tails havenât grown in, yet).
#FiFRevPit
Querying my #MG Elf Punk & starting the sequel! Interested in swapping w/a story about the fae returning to Earth & humans resenting them for fritzing out Earthâs electrical grid? A gang of fae orphans deal w/bigotry, preconceptions, and mercenary Ice Elves rounding up âbadâ fae.
#FiFRevPit #match
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âI wasnât old enough to remember the time before the faeries came back to Earth, back when lektricity still worked and people still used money and tell-phones and puters.â
#MG #amquerying
Well, thereâs the human Anti-Fae League that hates all refugees from the Faerie Realm and demands they go back where they came from. Then thereâs the army of mercenary issalfar (ice elves) tasked with capturing criminal fae and sending them back to the war-ravaged Realm. Take your pick.
What do yâall think about using this as my author photo when my MG novel (currently querying) gets published?
#FiFRevPit #writingcommunity
All his friends are fae-born.
But when anti-fae mobs rise, 10yo Edison Skrooluse has to rethink whatâs dangerous;
The kids who glow and sprout wings?
Or the people demanding they disappear?
Heâll need tech, teamwork, and heart to find out.
#MG #F #STEM #FIFRevPit #MockPit
A shadowy warlord is raising an army to drive the fae off Earth.
The sheriff turns a blind eye.
And 10yo inventor Edison canât fix hate with gadgets.
But with a golem built from junk, a glider, and a few brave friends, The Gadgeteer might change one townâs mind.
#MG #F #STEM #FIFRevPit #MockPit
10yo Edison is just a kid with no magic, a broken robot, and a workshop full of failed inventions. But when the Anti-Fae League targets his fae friends with hate and lies, Edison must fix the one thing he doesnât believe in to save them: Himself.
#MG #STEM #F #FIFRevPit #MockPit
Congratulations on your new releases. You mention your MSWL â are you acquiring manuscripts? How does one submit if our ms matches your MSWL? I have a MG Elf Punk that features a kitsune.
12yo Catch doesnât know magic. The Acolytes hunting him for his meteorite wand donât care. At Alpineâa spy school for wizardsâhe must master spell-hacked spycraft to stop them from enslaving Guardian Spirits & seizing the Minerals of Power.
NEVERMOOR X AMARI X ANDOR
#QuestPit #MG #F #AmQuerying
Edison Skrooluse and the Junkyard Bodyguard book cover
10yo Edison is just a kid with no magic, a broken robot, and a workshop full of failed inventions. But when the Anti-Fae League targets his fae friends with hate and lies, Edison must fix the one thing he doesnât believe in to save them: Himself.
#MG #STEM #F #SkyWrite #amquerying #KidLit #MSWL
Wrapped up revisions and polishing on my #MG ms, query, & synopsis with my amazing editor, @mariatureaud.bsky.social and sent out my first batch of queries Friday. Now, Iâm back to working on the sequel, and #FiF is just the motivation I need to get back in the groove. #WIP #RevPit
"You called us 'palebloods!'"
Thank you! Just got your letter and I feel so validated. Going to start querying very soon. Thanks for the kind words and encouragement. It means everything.