There's a gazelle across the canal with a chin like a peach, yet
I am not the one who I want him to
want me to be.
The gentle fawn passes: slim of flank, so delicate and tender, and
I was not the one who I wanted him to
want me to be.
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Posts by Obryon
Thank you. I love your work. Envious of the quality quantity. I'm a snail.
TIMELESS
Following the magnetic
lure of the dynamic
power in the carnival
jungle perpetual
indifference & aggression
fuels madness energy
Some seek
real one
hundred percent
poppycock
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RINSE, REPEAT (alliterative ardor)
Luminous droplets
Rinse the dross from my spirit.
Inner lucency!
Sticky old shadows dissolve.
I can breathe the scent of stars.
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Luv Renga chain play, yes then another haiku, then another 2 lines and so on.... Or were you thinking of, just finish the tanka, to see the variations. That would be cool too.
Still, when I hear
your music, which is playing
now, I am totally in synch
with you that I loved.
You tuned me in.
Where would we be
without people
showing us things?
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"If we don’t show anyone we’re free to write anything." –– Allen Ginsberg
appearances become
disheveled
aft the dance
before that we were
all so beautiful
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it's an act
of sympathetic magic
a deep and finally
organic belief
as if peeling a fruit
with great affection
that in your certainty of being
you are a star
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YES!
Red Cowboy Handkerchief
while walking
inside
I cannot
involve my sleeves
without
a yearning for
an available drench
of unseen years
there's a poem
in my pocket
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SUSPICION
“No non-particular
dispirited unwonted
non-wordiness!”
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we remain in place
our heart whispers
encompass our breath
tracing our paths
in the dark
until the sunrise
finds us
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ANATA
well do you sleep
dreaming of man
and his symbols
look at your hands
awakened to this
floating world
old buckets
can't keep
the moon
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INHALING
In The City
it is impossible
to touch on
a singular voice
absolved of restraint
floating on the all
-atmospheric
deep breath.
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he should've went
he just sat there
in his corvett
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Dear P
Got no game
like the girl with
her hair tips hanging
in her coffee across
from her furry-armed
baby-face boyfriend
who's knitting her
a sweater for war.
I flirt with trees—
you have
awesome eyes
I tell some.
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every way he turns
the way he is walking now
who is that changed boy
I remember you
before you boarded that train
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Not a fan of prompt writing, but you do so well at it with your flash fiction.
VESTMENT
seriously
un
-sacredotal
seminarian
could-
nt've
been
more
scandalous
seriously
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DAKOTA
surly
sure-footed
sure-fire
surely
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luv your blog
would like to believe that
whatever
they put into those books
not
like my own magick
relationships
embedded amongst depths
of correspondences
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Thanks for intro to Niikuni! Brilliant! His ideographic pallete bursts with ripe visual intention and meanings. I was dabbling as a college kid taking Japanese language courses.
(original version)
riding in your car
driving through the snowy trees
your hand on my knee
long before this night came true
that I loved a different you
ok omg, (if I didn't say so before) I love your work! This one is so clever.
I too dabbled in kanji concrete poetry.
Here's one I recreated from memory.
It's a toughy for those who don't know the kanji:
center = "surrounded"
around = "dish"
INDECISION
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LUV!