#WIPSnips from Monah Bk. 2 -- Ankara definitely has an agenda, but how long will that alone be the most important part of staying in Piatra Invelis?
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#WIPSnips from Monah Bk. 1 -- going for vibes with "analyze" -- Monah informs a citizen about the passing of Mother Bette, and Mr. Chandler doesn't take it well.
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#WIPSnips from Monah Bk. 1 -- using the verb phrase "sign up" -- This is more of the scene from Evlin showing up at Monah's house for the first time. I'm sure I've shared it before, but I've done a bit of editing since then.
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#WIPSnips from Monah Bk. 1 -- I think I've shared this snip before, but it's may favorite of the two times "fantasy" shows up in my main WIPs. This is when Evlin first shows up at Monah's door.
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#WIPSnips from Monah Bk. 1 -- using "endurance" -- As Evlin attempts to bring Monah into the castle for the first time, without calling any attention, Mon hears a conversation between Ev, Sonja, and Josef (a fellow Recruiter).
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#WIPSnips from Monah Bk. 1 -- Evlin & Faldor discuss "the new recruit" that's causing a stir.
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Thank you, Dan!!
Yeah, Monah hasn't come to terms with how much she likes hearing Ankara say that...yet. *chuckles in love triangle*
Heat, indeed! π₯
#WIPSnips from Monah Bk. 2 -- Ankara and Monah discuss the status of her relationship with Evlin, but someone else is filling Monah's thoughts.
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#WIPSnips from Monah Bk. 1 -- A bit of inner monologue from Monah, remembering her childhood and a special meadow behind her home after Bette's passing.
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#SundaySnips from Monah Bk. 1 -- Doliu helped Monah talk to her parents in a space between the living and the dead.
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Agreed!
Loving the energy and mood of this scene π and the hint of sentiment at the end makes me want to read more.
I like to think a lot of my writing alternates between cozy and spooky. They're my favorite things!
#WIPSnips from Monah Bk. 1 -- Evlin takes Monah to meet Doliu at her hut in the Grey, an old witch who is trusted by the Ancients and well-known among Invelisians.
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All the time! When I really get in the flow, & I'm not over-thinking it, the characters will go off in their own directions, & little details will surface, things I never could have outlined or planned beforehand. It's like sitting down & talking to the characters, rather than writing their story.
Exactly!! Evlin sees where this is going! π
#WIPSnips from Monah Bk. 1 -- using "processing" -- In their day jobs, Sonja and Evlin vet recruits or new arrivals to Piatra Invelis, and this snip of a conversation is about how one piece of Territory tech might speed up the process.
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I knew that history and all that Monah didn't know would be the foundation of this first book. It sort of built up and around her as the book progressed. I'm a pantser who has an idea where it will all go, which keeps things open so the characters and progression of plot often surprise me.
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Thank you!! That's what I was going for.
#WIPSnips from Monah Bk. 1 -- Liena and Monah talking about Bette, her powers, and all the history lessons Monah had been given over the years.
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#WIPSnips from Monah Bk. 2 -- using "needed" -- Evlin and Sonja discuss Lady Uthman (aka Ankara), taking advantage of a quiet moment amid the chaos.
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#WIPSnips from Monah Bk. 1 -- Wilem, feeling sorry for himself after a fight with Monah & his family, walks into the barracks and a whole other kind of mess.
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It's amazing how the mind works and makes associations. That happens with me and my own writing, too! π
Lots of writers write just like that, and that's when an editor can come in later and help make sure all those proverbial ducks are in a row once you get the words and scenes on the page.