active wip What Becomes of Still Waters by Frankie Joy Literary dark fantasy thirty chapters outlined drafting started
the pitch A woman from a line of madness finally proves she was never broken-the bog that has haunted her family for generations answers when she feeds it, crowning her in power. But when its hunger takes the woman she loves, she becomes something monstrous, lost to grief and still water. Meanwhile, her lover's twin brother journeys toward the horror with a worn-out knight-two men deemed expendable by a kingdom at war, finding each other on throad. What waits at the end will demand they all learn the same truth: the only way to survive is to let go. What Becomes of Still Waters Frankie Joy
the characters Lilijana and Rue Lilijana comes from a line of madness, drawn to the bog as her grandmother before her. Rue has stood by Lilijana their whole childhood. It was no surprise when Rue kissed Lilijana at the bog's edge years ago. Their love was born from loyalty and grief, and now must survive the same. Lukas and Sandro Lukas, burnt and blind in one eye, was deemed unfit for war. Sandro was a knight for the kingdom suddenly found expendable. Their love isn't fated-its consequence, earned mile by mile. What Becomes of Still Waters Frankie Joy
the opening The ground squished, thick mud slipping between Lilijana's toes. A deceiving patch of moss floated to her left. She pivoted to the right, settling on firm earth. Reeds bowed, bent by a warm gust. It carried the distinct smell of Mrkava's summers: ripening rye, wild strawberries, junipers, and decay. The near-intoxicating sweetness drifted near the far edge of the village, where the pine grew small and twisted. The bog lay there, only moss and water-so her mother often reminded. But it kept what it consumed. Generations ago her family's home was settled there, back when the bog was nothing more than a puddle. Now those weathered boards were buried deep in its soil. Her great aunt, too: wandered out on a waxing moon and never returned. She wasn't the only one in the matrilineal line to give to the bog. The first was a stillborn daughter. What Becomes of Still Waters Frankie Joy
WHAT BECOMES OF STILL WATERS
Two women, two men, and the bog at the edge of the village. Dual POV with f/f and m/m romantic arcs.
How much will Lilijana feed her madness? How long can Rue stand by her? Can Lukas and Sandro find purpose in one another?
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