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Okay. Seeing some chatter about this.

Y'all know there *are* actually three main SFF genres? Right?

Fantasy
Science Fantasy
Science Fiction

Please look them up. I guarantee if you're well-read in SFF you've read science fantasy and possibly didn't know it.

Sub-genres galore, too.

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That's why you'll see people writing/saying 're-scraped' vellum/parchment.

They were often reused. The hides just scraped down another layer to remove the writing. (Paintings were often painted over, too.)

Fun info, to me anyway.

Just WAIT until I get to the subject of lockpicking. πŸ˜‚

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use the clinical terms, because readers tend to find them not erotic.

Look. Real talk. If you're writing erotic material? You need to be able to use the words.

Alternatively, you can write closed door, or fade to black scenes.

Romance & erotica have moved waaaaay past those words.

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And yes, I've seen people using the terms for other body parts they sound like.

But those are the original meanings of those bits of slang.

Both are considered to be from the 20th century, but we don’t, apparently, know from exactly where.

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Seen it a few places lately soooo...

PALETTE: A range of colours, or a board an artist might use to mix colours.

PALATE: has several meanings, but the one most confused with palette is 'sense of taste'. IE: A developed palate for wines.

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It's written as 'all right'.

'Alright' is not yet an acceptable alternative spelling.

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It's

In/with regard to.

Not

In/with regards to.

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Please. For the love of readers' eyes, learn the difference between further and farther. They aren't the same. Further is not a fancy way of saying farther.

Further = metaphorical

Farther = Distance

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who are willing to work w/you.

It always strikes me as a shame when the editing is what's holding a book back from being great

There're also services like Prowritingaid, Grammarly, Hemingway etc. that can help

No, they aren't as good as a human editor. It's something though.

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Reminder that words like 'womanhood' 'manhood' 'womanly/manly parts' female/male parts is transphobic and you need to stop using this language in writing.

Trust me, we know what parts you're referring to, just label them.

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