I assume #MyPerfectOmega will be ending soon-ish?
I also assume Locke is in for a bad time.
And how bad a time is gonna be determined by how bad of a time Owen has.
... Sucks for Locke. 🤷
... Owen Rose is running circles in his own imagination over whether Nick will stay with him, meanwhile Nick Stockton is investigating a very real threat to Owen's actual person bc fuck if he's going to let anyone mess with his omega, and, omg, pls stop with this trope. 🫠 (1/4) #MyPerfectOmega
This should be ‘your’.
A trick with sentences like these is to remove the other person(s) from the sentence and see if it still makes sense grammatically. ‘How's you sex life?’ doesn't. 💁 #MyPerfectOmega #AMushroomEdits
This sentence is mixing two different idioms (‘staking my [x] on’ and ‘putting my [x] on the line’). With the way it's worded, it should be corrected as, ‘putting my name on the line here’. #MyPerfectOmega #AMushroomEdits
The word we want here is actually ‘inadmissible’.
Evidence obtained improperly or that has no chain of custody wouldn't be ‘dismissible’ from a case simply bc it wouldn't be accepted by the court in the first place. #MyPerfectOmega #AMushroomEdits
‘Free servants’? I think the word you want is ‘slaves’, actually, you sorry sack of shit. 😒 #MyPerfectOmega
Suddenly Honey Bear? 🐻🥐 #MyPerfectOmega
I was doing some catching up earlier and saw this. My Perfect Omega mentioned my home state! Let's go!
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John needs to learn to get to the point, ffs. Almost that whole chapter was him rambling about shit before telling Nick what he needed to know. 😤 #MyPerfectOmega
Oh, Owen... That's quite the imagination you've got. 😥 #MyPerfectOmega
The word ‘give’ is missing from between the two highlighted ones. #MyPerfectOmega #AMushroomEdits
Ngl, I don't remember which of these is the typo (where's the style sheet, Jon John? 💀), but one of them is. 👀😅 #MyPerfectOmega #AMushroomEdits
I mostly posted spicy things, but I really loved both #PawsAndClaws and #MyPerfectOmega today. Both were heartwarming with reassurances and affirmations of love. Just, ❤️❤️~
Three errors in one chapter is (always) entirely too many, y'all. 😩😒
I know Lezhin's font of choice doesn't have special characters, however, this word should be ‘exposé’. ‘Expose’ is a different (though related) word. #MyPerfectOmega #AMushroomEdits
More missing text. 🫠
Easiest fix is to have it read ‘we'll be seeing [each other] much more often’. Another option would be to shift things a bit and go with ‘we'll be seeing much more [of each other]’. #MyPerfectOmega #AMushroomEdits
There's a word missing here. I'm thinking ‘want’. #MyPerfectOmega #AMushroomEdits
In this case, ‘acid pheromones’ is the type of drug, the subject being referred to, and even though ‘pheromones’ is plural, the subject itself is not, so the highlighted word should be ‘is’. #MyPerfectOmega #AMushroomEdits
Simple enough: this should be ‘every’. #MyPerfectOmega #AMushroomEdits
Advil kicked in. 🥲👍
Anywho~
The word ‘a’ should precede ‘diluted solution’. He cuts himself off, so there's no context to the type of solution, so ‘a’ gives the right level of ambiguity.
Also, Locke Rose has fucking *issues*! That poor omega... 😕 #MyPerfectOmega #AMushroomEdits
Speaking of tags... Wtf, LezUS? 🤨 #MyPerfectOmega
This ‘this’ needs to be binned. #MyPerfectOmega #AMushroomEdits
Damn, Nick. Straight to the femoral artery. 🫢🤭 #MyPerfectOmega
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Title: My Perfect Omega
Writer: #Ikseon
Artist: #Heath
Original: #Ian
Platform: #Lezhin
Status: #Ongoing
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‘Repeat offenders’ is plural, so the highlighted contraction should be ‘haven't’. 💁 #MyPerfectOmega #AMushroomEdits
I do so love how Nick's all, ‘Great. I've found my fated pair! Let me use my company's resources and on-staff hacker to do invasive digging through his personal background instead of just talking to him like a normal person’. 💀 #MyPerfectOmega
Redundant ‘at’ should be binned. #MyPerfectOmega #AMushroomEdits
(I almost was gonna call out ‘canceled’—bc it looked weird to me at first glance—but it's not wrong. It's just American. 😅 [UK English is ‘cancelled’.])
Ahhhh him thinking about what to read for their future children!!😭 man is down down fr for his cute omega ahhh we love a man who ask for consent🫶🏼
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