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Foreshadowing
“Give me a reason. I see no hope; I see no point in existence. We are doomed to wander this plane,
without purpose, without a cause. All I know is that we are the salt of the Earth.” - Black Tongue
What exists beyond the night that never ends? Does the silence persist? Does it echo with the dripping
faucet, keeping time with its droplets? Will day ever break again? Or does the withered form sinking into
the couch become stuck in time? A weight on its chest pulling it down towards the floor.
Perpetual night doesn't sound so bad until your eyes glaze over and your ears are filled with
mothballs. The night owl mentality feels mysterious, but it owes itself to a loneliness not felt by most
others. Being left alone in the sunlight on a busy street is a world away from being alone under a
streetlamp at 2a.m.
Being alone in your head is yet another world.

Foreshadowing “Give me a reason. I see no hope; I see no point in existence. We are doomed to wander this plane, without purpose, without a cause. All I know is that we are the salt of the Earth.” - Black Tongue What exists beyond the night that never ends? Does the silence persist? Does it echo with the dripping faucet, keeping time with its droplets? Will day ever break again? Or does the withered form sinking into the couch become stuck in time? A weight on its chest pulling it down towards the floor. Perpetual night doesn't sound so bad until your eyes glaze over and your ears are filled with mothballs. The night owl mentality feels mysterious, but it owes itself to a loneliness not felt by most others. Being left alone in the sunlight on a busy street is a world away from being alone under a streetlamp at 2a.m. Being alone in your head is yet another world.

Did an editing pass of my 2025 WIP #UnderneathEverySmile and it felt good to enjoy pouring over the words after so long.

That's the best feeling for me, rereading my work and falling in love with it all over again.

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Packing was slow and uneventful. She took the stashed boxes out of her closet and from under her bed. She started with the closet, things seldom used, barely wanted. Mostly vestiges of the past she was too weak to get rid of. Toys from when she was a preteen, tests from middle school showing how gifted she was, old birthday cards, tokens and detritus from a time she often yearned for. Talismans keeping the dream alive that if she surrounded herself with the past and let herself succumb to nostalgia she could be transported to a time when she wasn’t afraid, or anxious or unhappy. A time before words like depression or suicide existed in her lexicon and her heart. Breadcrumbs leading her back to a fantasy.

Packing was slow and uneventful. She took the stashed boxes out of her closet and from under her bed. She started with the closet, things seldom used, barely wanted. Mostly vestiges of the past she was too weak to get rid of. Toys from when she was a preteen, tests from middle school showing how gifted she was, old birthday cards, tokens and detritus from a time she often yearned for. Talismans keeping the dream alive that if she surrounded herself with the past and let herself succumb to nostalgia she could be transported to a time when she wasn’t afraid, or anxious or unhappy. A time before words like depression or suicide existed in her lexicon and her heart. Breadcrumbs leading her back to a fantasy.

Excerpt from UNDERNEATH EVERY SMILE:

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Preview
a close up of a man 's face with the words `` it 's done '' written on the bottom . Alt: Frodo saying "it's done" as the lava of Mt. Doom flows around him

Finished the first draft of #UnderneathEverySmile

Now I'll rest before sifting through all the angst, trauma, and grammatical errors in the editing phase.

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Two* more chapters left in my WIP.

*maybe, unless I need a third to flesh something out.

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Describe your WIP in 5 emojis.

Underneath Every Smile:
😭💔🤷‍♀️⏳📖

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A rush of blood to the head. Melissa might just go Postal this time around.

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Writers, describe your WIP in the worst way possible.

"It isn't a phase dad! I'm emo through and through!"

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Have you added your IRL friends to your WIPs?

My friend Chad is in #UnderneathEverySmile and I just created a character in #DreamsOfMachines for my other buddy Ben.

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There are plenty of memories I wish I could burn from my mind too. Better to write them down I suppose.

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In #UnderneathEverySmile Melissa is stuck in the past, mired in trauma, and unwilling to break free from her set path (death). She is apathetic to finding a way out that keeps her alive, ready and willing to end it all once the stars align.
#LateNightWrite

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Incidentally one of my favorites as well.

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#UnderneathEverySmile is a look into my past.

A story of pain, loss, growing up, and love.

It tackles some of my darkest days and the people who helped get me through, in one way or another.

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Been away diligently making progress on the WIP.

Hit 76k yesterday. Headed for 80.

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Music plays a HUGE role in my WIP. I built a playlist to write to. Here a few featured tracks:

April by Tesseract
The Ghost of You by MCR
Six Feet Closer to Hell by Carnifex
That's What You Get by Paramore
Mythology by VersaEmerge
End of Me by ADTR

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Karmic justice comes for us all.

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Hush little baby don't say a word, mama's gonna go postal in this office, mark my words.

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A monotonous existence is driving her down a road she can't come back from.

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Break - Disable

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The ebbs and flows of suicidal ideation, identity, self-worth, and the nature of trauma.

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Road rash and a slight concussion were nothing compared to the wrath of a sister scorned.

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Align - Synchronize

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When words lose their meaning we lose all reasons to use them properly.

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She's beauty, she's grace, she'll rip off your face. 👿

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Happy Friday #PretendPanel!

After I finish Draft 1 of #UnderneathEverySmile and finalize the MS for #ThePact it's onto buckling down once again with my steampunk novel #DreamsOfMachines.

My unofficial editor has been harping on me for months (over a year). Sadly I go where the words take me.

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"She learned later that they don’t partake in uppers, downers, whizzers, bangers, or any sort of fun thing that helps normies forget that they’re a brain in a bone bowling ball, surrounded in electrically charged meat."

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There was no clear path from confrontation to peace. All roads were paved with pain.

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Just a room full of NPCs with no fruitful dialogue options.

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🎶No matter who calls, I gotta screen my phone-calls🎶

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#UnderneathEverySmile is full of real life analogs so most of the people in it fit a purpose.

In #ThePact, Amelia went from being a simple victim/survivor to a full blown hunter of the supernatural. Plans became very apparent for her spin-off. And her lineage became strong as well.

#ComJunity

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Maybe if she stares long enough, he'll appear.

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What's a little manslaughter between friends?

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In #UnderneathEverySmile Melissa converses a lot with aspects of herself personified.

Mimi, her immaturity. Liza, her burgeoning maturity. Elli, her contempt (for others and herself). And an unnamed 4th, her empathy.

Each is born at a different part of her life journey.

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