Does this feel too abrupt? I'm not sure if it feels like I've adequately built the argument to land at this point. is this a pretentious way of writing?

Perhaps this is too much caveating. Consider pulling back a bit. I could just delete this entire clause after the last comma...

okay yeah this is definitely pretentious though

ain't nobody a harsher critic than past-me leaving notes for present-me, though I definitely plan on kicking this down the road for future-me to figure out

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Publishing companies like Elsevier make billions of dollars exploiting academia, and now they’re selling our data.

We’re long overdue to organize and strike against these publishing companies until costs come down and our data is secure. #academiachat #StrikeElsevier

Excited to be joining Bluesky! I’m a PhD student exploring the effects of high protein diets on the microbiome and gut barrier function.
Looking for industry connections and more information on the MSL career if anyone has experience in it?
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