I think the verb "to inch" is great. I mean, you can't force that to be metric can you?
"She two-or-so-centimetered closer to him" just doesn't have the same impact, does it? π
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I'm inching closer to starting to properly plan "The Seventh". This follows "Skirmishes and Schisms", though not immediately.
Once I have ensured all versions of The Cleansing are at the correct stage, I'll have the right rhythm going.
I'm not a great planner, but I need to be better.
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As things currently stand, #Patreon and #KoFi subscribers are two episodes ahead of what has been published publicly.
That is about the cadence I intend to keep going forward.
Thank you to anyone willing to read the stuff I write. I have no way of knowing if you do, but I'm grateful.
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While it is still well behind the article/post version, I've updated the manuscript version of "The Cleansing" as well today.
You can now read up to the end of Chapter 17.
Although I get minimal data, if you view or read my #writing, thank you.
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Episode 30 of "The Cleansing" is now live:
Vazkyr and Kanda-Nor enjoy a relaxed end of the day.
Back in ShanvΓ©r Woods, ShenzΓ n was already waiting to question Findat about the dangers of their mission. Tempers flair and Azachet is forced to intervene.
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You're welcome. I try to get out most days. Sometimes it's for inspiration, but sometimes, just being away from things that cause tension (including sitting at a computer) can help.
And if you don't get the answers, you've had air and had good time AFK. π
I have almost brought my Chapters on #WorldAnvil up-to-date.
So I've published Episodes 28 and 29 of The Cleansing tonight.
Vazkyr at her most flustered and forgetting basic things like...shoes.
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It appears sitting under a tree, looking up at the sky and meditating on what the clouds look like IS a good way to drum up ideas.
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It's difficult when some things in life just... are.
Maybe go on a walk in loose-legged trousers and experience them, or something? See how they feel to you, how they reflect or absorb the light etc. Just an idea.
I'm not sure how to describe this. Across the middle of the landscape-oriented rectangle is deep blue strip which has a shadow along the top and bottom edges. In white, capital letters in the centre of the image - and the strip - is the word "Familiarity". Behind the title script are various, obscured so now abstract black and white hand-drawn shapes, though the background appears mountainous and there is a being of some description in front of those mountains as upper and lower arms can be seen.
I've been able to schedule next week's early-access chapter of The Cleansing on Patreon and Ko-Fi.
In Episode 32, Kanda-Nor and Vazkyr get familiar talking about familiars.
Episodes 1 - 28 are now available on @worldanvil.com.
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It's been a rough week with my general health and pain levels.
But I have managed to write ~1200 words (by hand, hence approximate) for my #serialfiction.
If I could just douse the brain fog, I could write much more.
It's hard to write when your brain fires in 10 different directions.
Well this is awful.
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Well, I mean, it's not entirely false... π
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A hand drawn square sketch on yellowing paper. In the foreground is the head and shoulders of a fantasy character based on a tiger. She has cheek stripes and neck stripes that look like rings around her neck. A simple pendant is hung around her neck on a thin chain. Her hair is roughly parted in the middle, but flows out in haphazard ways, including over her forehead and onto her nose. Her head is slightly tipped down, while he eyes stare directly at you. She is wearing a simple, buttoned coat, reminiscent of a modern-day lab coat, and a stick of charcoal and a wedge of paper stick out of a breast pocket. Text reads: the burden of capability - FJ Brodie
Another #sketch of Azachet from an upcoming episode of "The Cleansing".
It's kinda tricky doing my own character #drawing when I'm self-taught, but I'd rather they be imperfect and made by myself, than by a machine.
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A rough pencil sketch of the head and neck of a tiger-like character in my writing. Aside from the broad nose, her ears are more pointed than you'd expect a tiger. She has hints of stripes near her cheekbones, a messy fringe flowing between her ears and over her forehead and messy, wavy hair on either side of her head. The text reads: Azachet, 12 min
I've been trying to practice drawing my characters' faces in under 15 minutes. No problem if you're an artist. But me, yep.
Here's my 12 minute Azachet, the Sablesand tiger from The Cleansing.
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Hey Folks,
I finally finished the #pencildrawing for my fantasy chapter. I've uploaded it to my @artfol.app page.
I've also added new Early Access chapters to both my Ko-Fi and Patreon folk.
More story going public soon, too.
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A part completed pencil sketch. The scene is a darkened forest, though you can mostly only see the bases of tree trunks. A huge spider, with strong legs and spiked tip has reared up onto its back two legs. Its other six are pointing towards a person in a full length robe standing on the ground. The person is leaning back, their head at an angle looking towards the spider's eyes. He is pointing a staff with a kind of crystal-shaped tip towards the spider. The bottom right is mostly empty or outline sketched. Text: "Light will only get you so far" Text 2: "FJ Brodie | WIP"
I've been unable to do much of the writing as I have wanted to, but at least this #drawing related to my serial #fiction is finally coming together.
Still some spider details, tree shading and light casting/shadows to do, though.
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All the indie authors who use AI for their covers because βwhat am I supposed to do, I canβt afford an artistβ would probably have a melt down if artists did paintings and had AI write books to go with the paintings.
Anyway, shout out to indie authors who have really bad photoshop covers.
I have a #NewChapter of "The Cleansing" out now.
The confrontation with ShanvΓ©r's spiders still fresh in their minds, Shen, Vider and Veman trudge back to rejoin the others.
Their complementary skills give ShenzΓ n concerns about their mission.
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I still haven't fully adjusted to being on a lower #WorldAnvil package where I can't set my own "meta" title tag and meta description.
I'm sure there must have been some logic behind it at @worldanvil.com HQ, but I can't figure it. I'd have to almost double my membership fee to get it though.
While not new, I've done a re-read of Episode 14 "Meanwhile in Cafe Svarte"
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For anyone reading via @worldanvil.com's Manuscripts, that chapter has been added here:
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Enjoy.
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I had a meds review for my #chronicpain and dosages have been tweaked.
This week, I have managed to type up some serial fiction, and I've started a "chapter sketch".
I hope to have new Qal'ath content out early next week.
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Thank you. It's #Fibromyalgia in my case, and I have a medication review this week because all my pain has done over the last two months has got worse and worse.
It's hard getting anything done, isn't it?
Be careful in "pushing through" that you don't crash harder later.
A photo of some bits of paper where I've been writing or planning a timeline by hand.
I hadn't intended on being of social media this long. My chronic pain and fatigue have been frustrating and I've ended up crashing out on the sofa, rather than out in the office.
And I had forgotten I'd removed the Bluesky app from my phone. I don't even remember why.
I've been #writing though.
I've had my head in some woodwork the last few days, but my brain is whirring on a few story elements coming up in The Cleansing.
Next week I have to sit down and do some planning for a new novel-length piece. With the way my tales work, more coffee than normal will be needed!
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@worldanvil.com Hey, I'm updating my Mastodon profile and have added a link to my WA site. But I'd like to manage to do the verifying process. Unfortunately that involves rel="me", and I don't think we can add that with the current BB Code, can we?
Could this be added to our profile social links?
This is refreshing. I don't do the playlist thing, but yes to the others.
Especially the doubt. And the being left behind.
I really hope #WorldAnvil bring some of their awesome article editor upgrades to Manuscripts.
I have to remind myself sometimes that WA is primarily a World-building site, and they can't bring all their awesome features to every aspect, just because I want to use Manuscript /and/ Article format.
I'm having to battle a bit with @worldanvil.com's old-school WYSIWYG editor that's in their manuscripts feature, but I'm slowly migrating chapters in now.
The cleansing in quasi "book-form" is up to Chapter 11 as of now.
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