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Work Title The Final Encore
Work Length 11,324 (Complete, 3 chapters)
Pairing/Summary Withers x Dribbles post canon - Withers brings Dribbles the Clown, aka Norris Greenie, back from the dead to perform at the epilogue party, though once the heroes have all turned in for the night that leaves one recently dead clown and one retired god by the fireside...
Intention: You'll laugh, you'll cry, you'll have the most confusing boner of your life.
CW/TW List Angst, character death, trans!Withers, oral sex (both ways), vaginal sex, sex in bath, mention of top surgery scars, and there's a brief part where Withers has his head underwater but it's explicitly stated he doesn't actually need to breathe so he's completely fine and no breathplay
Deadline Sunday 20th if possible so I can free up for other things? But it is long. I can wait if needed.
What Feedback You Want sensitivity read for trans character (Withers and his marvellous magical Withussy), general error picking, potentially suggestions for any words like [word?] or [vague sentiment?] but I am planning to go through and replace bracketed terms to prevent word repetition or awkward phrasing, overall story feedback also good, as well as tone and pacing of it.
Any Other Pertinent Detail This is for NorrisFest so the vibes are more Dribbles-centred than Withers, but I'm happy for them to share the spotlight. Feel free to be brutal with editing feedback, I want to pick over this one and tidy it up. I'm also thinking of releasing it in 3 stages with one chapter every couple of days to just draw it out a little as it is a longer piece. So could work on getting one chapter polished up at a time. Note - "Norris Greenie" is Dribbles' canon name, it's in the game in a note somewhere that he was a heckler who was funnier than the current clown, so he got hired on as the replacement.
*BETA READER WANTED*
I have put the ask out in a couple of the usual places but as it's a longer piece and probably more niche (plus I'm feeling a liiiittle anxious about it) I'm going to make a public ask on it!
#Withers x #DribblesTheClown is just over 11k words, complete, and needs edit help 😱🙏🥺💙