A BBC Sport headline reads ‘Who needs cup final victory most - Arteta or Guardiola’. It should of course say ‘more’ instead of ‘most’ - as only two things are being compared.

‘Who needs cup final victory *more’ #LiteracyCrisis #AlwaysEditing

I #assure you that its harmless
Quite affordable
And fun
No insurance necessary
Once it has begun
Filled with sound and color
Takes no batteries to run
Guaranteed excitement
All assembly pre-done
Act now.
Hurry quick!
You can have the first one.

#vss365 #take2 #alwaysediting

Attitude
Made clear
#gratitude
Was mere
Platitude

#alwaysediting #vss365 #writingcommunity #halfbadpoetry #taketwo

Should have written “enormous load of Travis Kelce penis submissions” but what’s done is done. #alwaysediting

Of course I woke up, saw your laughy face, reread the poem and realized the last line totally should have been

Domestic will do

I mean... Oh well. #alwaysediting

Cheers!

Oh that? Just a barn owl
Ascreech in the night
No hoots. They prefer
rasping eerie delight

#taketwo #alwaysediting #halfbadpoetry

Shoutout to country singer Josh Ross who uses the proper subjunctive mood in his new hit "Leave Me Too" by singing "if I were you, I'd leave me too." #grammarnerd #alwaysediting

Some more submitting today, lots of editing, some world building. Leftovers for dinner, cats are annoyed that we don't open a window for them.
#alwayswriting #alwaysediting #submitting #fiction #cnf #microfictin #litmags #blueskywriters

Was also useful to look at what lines I was unwilling to share that contained the colour black #alwaysediting

Photo of laptop Computer open with words in the screen

#trainwriting
#londonday
#writingcommunity
#amwriting
#alwaysediting

#WeDigBio2018 @BRIT_org and loving on this 1972 label that correctly put the comma inside the quotation mark. #alwaysediting #grammarthroughtheages (#britishenglishisdifferent don’t @ me!)