Page from unreleased book, note says “Still needs work” ##2. Not So Fast Cowboy (Larry) ++STILL NEEDS WORK++ He'd been out walking around the city tonight because he couldn't shake the image. The one that kept him awake most nights. Veronica, all fury and fangs, on fire. She was a vampire, but she'd stepped into the setting sun to save his life. He'd thought their semi-date and make out session had been good, but he'd not thought she liked him as much as he liked her. Almost dying to save your sorry ass is a good sign a girl likes you,_ he rationalized as he rounded the corner on another block. However, this seemed contradicted by the way she'd left after being injured. Off to a house of healing, _whatever that is, _ with no communication since.
Notes I leave for myself when editing become more pointed the longer the re-write process goes on. #indieauthor #writingchallenges (Chapter 2 of Vampire Detective Agency: Double Date)